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in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from haelth problems as a result of eating too much fast food',it is necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food?

in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from haelth problems as a result of eating too much fast food', it is necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food? Bqjp
in the midst of modernisation driven globalisation the eating habit of multitudes have revolutionized the society ।in this senario, masses are fascinated towards packed meals which put negative impact on their health. A portion of society deemed that hefty amount of taxes sholud be imposed by regime on this food to lower its consumption. i somewhat agreed or somewhat disagreed with this given notion.
in
the midst of
modernisation
driven
globalisation
the eating habit of multitudes have revolutionized the society
।in
this
senario
, masses
are fascinated
towards packed meals which put
negative
impact on their health. A portion of society deemed that hefty amount of taxes
sholud
be imposed
by regime on this food to lower its consumption.
i
somewhat
agreed
or somewhat disagreed with this
given
notion.
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IELTS essay in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from haelth problems as a result of eating too much fast food', it is necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food?

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  American English
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64 words
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