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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. qbqd
Recycling is the best way to deal with the waste and it is very important for our surrounding. but due to various reasons enough waste are not collected properly. many people think that the only way to climbed up recycling the higher authorities should plan some rules to make collect waste mandatory and i personaly agree with the statement and here some reasons are discussed In the modern era, there are plethora of things which used in our daily life and it increase with leaps and bounds. Due to the roses of daily needs multitudes become habitual of use and throw things which cause of waste and create lot of environment effect in term of pollution. The another thing is that most of individuals not aware about recycling in this day and age. There are large amount of waste which is easily take from houses like newspapers, plastic bottles and canes if they are collected in proper way which are helpful in many catagories. Moving further, there are many reasons that waste from homes not properly collected because people are not aware that this material will be reused. The governments will help the living beings by providing them knowledge of recycling and if higher authorities maintain some rules and regulations and strictly demonstrate the laws then definatly it will work and collect the waste from home to home with day to day the more waste collected and then recycled more and become a best way to deal with recycled To conclude, if there are various laws to collect the waste from homes is restricted become a great way to deal with waste and recycled it.
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Recycling
is the best way to deal with the
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waste
and it is
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very
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important
for our surrounding.
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but
due to various reasons
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enough
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waste
are not collected
properly
.
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many
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people
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think
that the
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only
way to climbed up
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recycling
the higher authorities should plan
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some
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rules
to
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make
collect
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waste
mandatory and i
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personaly
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agree
with the statement and here
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some
reasons
are discussed


In the modern era, there are plethora of things which
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used
in our daily life and it
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increase
with leaps and bounds. Due to the roses of daily needs multitudes become habitual of
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use
and throw things which cause of
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waste
and create
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lot of
environment effect in term of pollution. The another thing is that
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most of individuals
not aware about
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recycling
in this day and age. There are large
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amount
of
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waste
which is
easily
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take
from
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houses
like newspapers, plastic bottles and canes if they
are collected
in proper way which are helpful in
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many
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catagories
. Moving
further
, there are
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many
reasons that
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waste
from
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homes
not
properly
collected
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because
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people
are not aware that this material will
be reused
. The
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governments
will
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help
the living beings by providing them knowledge of
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recycling
and if higher authorities maintain
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some
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rules
and regulations and
strictly
demonstrate the laws then
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definatly
it will work and collect the
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waste
from home to home with day to day the more
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waste
collected and then recycled more and become
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a
best way to deal with recycled

To conclude
, if there are various laws to collect the
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waste
from
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homes
is restricted
become a great way to deal with
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waste
and recycled it.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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