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In some cities, government has tried to tax the owners of the vehicles, for example to reduce the traffic congestion. Do you think it is a positive or a negative impact?

In some cities, government has tried to tax the owners of the vehicles, for example to reduce the traffic congestion. Do you think it is a positive or a negative impact? xOwqy
Traffic has always been a burning issue for any governments in every countries all over the world. Several measures have been taken to decrease traffic such as imposing congestion tax during peak hours. I believe this as a positive development. There are several advantages of congestion tax. Firstly, imposing tax can reduce rush hour traffic jam in urban areas. People are discouraged from using their own vehicles and this method encourage them to use public transport. If many people have access to public transport, they will stop going by car. Hence, the congestion will gradually decline. In addition, using public transports will save the money and resources of both individuals and society. Secondly, imposition on congestion helps government earn more legitimate revenue. Therefore, they can invest that amount to improve its transport infrastructures as well as upgrading and expanding public transport provision. For example, the authorities of London have spent a large amount of money on improving capacity and reliability of the subway system in order to ease traffic flow in city centre. Apart from the practical benefits expressed above, i believe that one of main advantages of congestion charge is to alleviate environmental problems. This regulation limits the use of personal vehicle. Due to fewer car used, the exhaust fumes from cars will be less. Consequently, air and noise pollution will be lessened, which contribute to protecting the environment. Furthermore, the city become more attractive for pedestrians and cyclists, which will help increase quality of life. In conclusion, for all reasons mentioned above, I believe that the congestion tax is a progressive turn as it is beneficial for both citizens and environment as a whole.
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Traffic
has always been a burning issue for any
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governments
in every
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countries
all over the world. Several measures have
been taken
to decrease
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traffic
such as imposing
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congestion
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tax
during peak hours. I believe this as a
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positive
development. There are several advantages of
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congestion
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tax
.
Firstly
, imposing
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tax
can
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reduce
rush hour
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traffic
jam in urban areas.
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People
are discouraged
from using their
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own
vehicles and this method encourage them to
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use
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public
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transport
. If
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many
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people
have access to
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public
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transport
, they will
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stop
going by car.
Hence
, the
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congestion
will
gradually
decline.
In addition
, using
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public
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transports
will save the money and resources of both individuals and society.
Secondly
, imposition on
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congestion
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helps
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government
earn more legitimate revenue.
Therefore
, they can invest that amount to
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improve
its
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transport
infrastructures
as well
as upgrading and expanding
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public
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transport
provision.
For example
, the authorities of London have spent a large amount of money on improving capacity and reliability of the subway system in order to
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ease
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traffic
flow in city
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centre
. Apart from the practical benefits expressed above,
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i
believe that one of main advantages of
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congestion
charge is to alleviate environmental problems. This regulation limits the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of personal vehicle. Due to fewer car
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used
, the exhaust fumes from cars will be less.
Consequently
, air and noise pollution will
be lessened
, which contribute to protecting the environment.
Furthermore
, the city become more attractive for pedestrians and cyclists, which will
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help
increase quality of life.
In conclusion
, for all reasons mentioned above, I believe that the
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congestion
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tax
is a progressive turn as it is beneficial for both citizens and environment as a whole.
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IELTS essay In some cities, government has tried to tax the owners of the vehicles, for example to reduce the traffic congestion. Do you think it is a positive or a negative impact?

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