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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this? Wyyo5

There is view that, some of places in the US a special time is applied, in which teenagers are prohibited to go outside after a certain time without older. This essay will explore a number of possible factors behind this rule and detail some of benefits that can offer parents. To begin with, going outside of the house without an adult is not safe for teenagers. That type of the rule is imposed a country like the US, which its means some towns people is populated very sparsely. Having a low population human attract some wild animals to villages and as well as it is relevant environment for predators. For example, some places in the US, which far from city incur wolf attack in the midnight. Hence, going outdoors alone in such places is dangerous for the children after curfew. Walking outdoor alone at night is also risky for the people who under 18. In this case, curfew sometimes are imposed for security reasons and it can be effective in reducing teenage crimes, which is becoming a global problem in the society. The teenagers might be involved bad habits if they lack of control from their parents. Thus, curfew is not only method to protect kids, but also parents frequently have to protect their children, especially at the midnight when they come back to home form outside. In conclusion, imposing this type of curfew it is a good policy for society and it is should be supported by parents, which protect them from sinister habits.

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some of places
 in the US a special time is applied
, in which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
are prohibited
 to go outside after a certain time without older. This essay will explore a number of possible factors behind this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 and detail After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the benefits") or simply say "some benefits".some of the benefitssome benefits
some of benefits
 that can offer parents.

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begin
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outside of
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 without an adult is not safe for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
. That type of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
is imposed
 a country like the US, which its means This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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people
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is
 populated This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
sparsely
. Having a low population human attract This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 wild animals to villages and as well
 as it is relevant environment for predators. For example
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places in the US, which far from city incur wolf attack in the midnight. Hence
, going outdoors alone in such places is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 for the children after curfew.

Walking outdoor alone at night is also
 risky for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who under 18. In this case
, curfew This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
are imposed
 for security reasons and it can be effective in reducing teenage crimes, which is becoming a global problem in the society. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 might be involved
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 habits if they lack of control from their parents. Thus
, curfew is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 method to protect kids, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 parents frequently
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 protect their children, especially
 at the midnight when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back to home form outside.

In conclusion
, imposing this type of curfew it is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 policy for society and it Did you mean "it"?it
is
 should be supported
 by parents, which protect them from sinister habits. 