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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. v.5

In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. v. 5
Nowadays, some people prefer to read e-books instead of reading printed books. In my opinion, reading e-books is more advantageous than reading paper based books. Firstly, if you prefer to read on your mobile devices, laptops or other hand-held devices, you can read books everywhere. Moreover, you do not have to carry books in your bag. Secondly, some publishing companies have not chosen to publish the paper based recently because they think the production of paperback books is more expensive than the e-book version. Therefore, the prices of e-books are cheaper than the price of paper books. For this reason, particularly University students opt to purchase e-books. Finally, e-books are easier to purchase and with the facility of online purchase, anyone gets an ebook whenever s/he wants. It was environment-friendly as it requires no papers, ink and saves the trees that would have been used to produce papers. On the Other hand, many excellent books have been published only on paper based. Thus, if you would like to read them on your mobile devices, unfortunately, you could not avail them. In addition, many old books are not published any longer even paper based. You can find them only in the library. For example, in my University years, I had to read a book that is about business history and I wanted to read it on my iPhone. I searched it on the internet but I could not find it even in paper based. So I had to go to the library and I could find it in there. In conclusion, even if some books are published only paper based and sometimes it is tough to find e-books version and in my view, reading e-books are more advantageous than reading paper books. Furthermore, I would argue that day today the popularity of e-books will increase.
Nowadays,
some
people
prefer to
read
e-books
instead
of
reading
printed
books
. In my opinion,
reading
e-books is more advantageous than
reading
paper based books.

Firstly
, if you prefer to
read
on your mobile devices, laptops or other hand-held devices, you can
read
books
everywhere.
Moreover
, you do not
have to
carry
books
in your bag.
Secondly
,
some
publishing
companies
have not chosen to publish the paper based recently
because
they
think
the production of paperback
books
is more expensive than the e-book version.
Therefore
, the prices of e-books are cheaper than the price of paper
books
.
For this reason
,
particularly
University students opt to
purchase
e-books.

Finally
, e-books are easier to
purchase
and with the facility of online
purchase
, anyone
gets
an
ebook
whenever s/he wants. It was environment-friendly as it requires no papers, ink and saves the trees that would have been
used
to produce papers.

On the Other hand
,
many
excellent
books
have
been published
only
on paper based.
Thus
, if you would like to
read
them on your mobile devices, unfortunately, you could not avail them.
In addition
,
many
old
books
are not published any longer even paper based. You can
find
them
only
in the library.
For example
, in my University years, I had to
read
a
book
that is
about business history and I wanted to
read
it on my iPhone. I searched it on the internet
but
I could not
find
it even in paper based.
So
I had to go to the library and I could
find
it in there.

In conclusion
, even if
some
books
are published
only
paper based and
sometimes
it is tough to
find
e-books version and in my view,
reading
e-books are more advantageous than
reading
paper
books
.
Furthermore
, I would argue that day
today
the popularity of e-books will increase.
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IELTS essay In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. v. 5

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
304 words
6.5
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