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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development P33w

Recently, buyers are preferring to shop from big shopping hubs or malls resulting, close-down of traditional shopping stores. This is a negative development because it is the source of income for small vendors and products are costly in big malls. The biggest problem arise with the development of malls is that it is curtailing the source of revenue generation of penny shopkeepers. Small vendors are usually engaged in departmental or grocery stores and do not focus on expanding their business. Addition to it, entire family expense is also fulfilling from that single source of income and their children also join their parents to run it in traditional manner. For example, in India, 60% of grocery stores’ owner running the shop which is started by their ancestors.

Recently, buyers The verb 'preferring' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are preferring
 to shop from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 shopping hubs or malls resulting, close-down of traditional shopping stores. This is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 development This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is the source of income for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 vendors and products are costly in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 malls.

The biggest problem arise with the development of malls is that it is curtailing the source of revenue generation of penny shopkeepers. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
Small
 vendors are usually
 engaged in departmental or grocery stores and do not focus on expanding their business. Addition to it, entire family expense is also
 fulfilling from that single source of income and their children also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 their parents to run it in traditional manner. For example
, in India, 60% of grocery stores’ owner running the shop which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 by their ancestors. 