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In order to solve traffic problems, government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of sucb a solution? Give reasons foe your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Traffic congestion is a long and unresolve phenomenon that different countries are experiencing with. Some say, private car owners should be tax heavily by the government and use the money to improve public transportation. With this, positive and adverse side arises and we will tackle them as we go along with this essay. To begin with, one of the positive side of this agenda is that less people will sought to buy private cars. They will just commute with public transportations like trains and buses thus, reducing traffic problems. Furthermore, improvement of public transportation will happen; additional buses and trains will occur and numerous people will be catered well. On the other hand, if this will be legalize, private car owners will object; thus followed by chaos within people and government. In addition, overcrowding will occur if large quantity of people will use the public transportation. Car companies will have a low sales of their cars, somehow affecting the economy of the country. To sum it up, one solution of a problem results in the existence of advantages and disadvantages.

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Some
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car
 owners should be tax heavily
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government
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
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public
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transportation
. With this, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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begin
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positive
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less
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people
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sought
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buy
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cars
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just
 commute with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
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transportations
 like trains and buses thus
, reducing traffic problems. Furthermore
, improvement of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
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transportation
 will happen; additional buses and trains will occur and numerous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 will be catered
 well.

On the other hand
, if this will be Consider using the past participle “legalized”.legalized
legalize
, private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 owners will object; thus
 followed by chaos within You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
. In addition
, overcrowding will occur if large quantity of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
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transportation
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
Car
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companies
 will have a low sales of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
, somehow affecting the economy of the country.

To sum it up, one solution of a problem results in the existence of advantages and disadvantages. 