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In my opinion, three works of three people in paragraph are very interesting

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In my opinion, three works of three people in paragraph are very interesting. They are busy for their job and sometimes have a difficult. All three job bring benefits to people: Ricky Qi wants his films and photographs help somebody have a difficult ways of living and thinking; Kakani Katija dives in order to show how animals swim and eat; Christine Lee finds a story has been buried for a long time ago. That’s so exciting! And their story make me feel surprise and one story so scare about the skeleton. As a whole, I realy enjoy their jobs and so admire them.
In my opinion, three works of three
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people
in paragraph are
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very
interesting. They are busy for their job and
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sometimes
have
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a difficult
. All three job bring benefits to
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people
: Ricky
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Qi
wants his films and photographs
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help
somebody have a difficult
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ways
of living and thinking;
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Kakani
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Katija
dives in order to
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show
how animals swim and eat; Christine Lee finds a story has
been buried
for a long time ago. That’s
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so
exciting! And their story
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make
me feel surprise and one story
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so
scare about the skeleton. As a whole, I
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realy
enjoy their jobs and
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so
admire them.
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IELTS essay In my opinion, three works of three people in paragraph are very interesting

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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