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In my opinion, people nowadays have become more lazy overall, including in their free time as compare with that in the past.

In my opinion, people nowadays have become more lazy overall, including in their free time as compare with that in the past. pYVd
In my opinion, people nowadays have become more lazy overall, including in their free time as compare with that in the past. One of the major reason for this is the ease of access to other entertainment sources. People in the past were more productive and active throughout their routine, on the contrary nowadays everyone is productive to an extent and needs frequent breaks during work. This necessity if felt because of the various time-pass options people have in thier spare time. I have seen many people perform their daily activities with minimum movements. Lets take an example of working individuals, they complete their tasks just by sitting in one place the whole time, this generates a feeling of tireness and to overcome it they prefer playing video games or scrolling through the internet in their free time, instead of streaching and moving their body. This is the very main reason for being less active, and during a pandemic, the way we are in currently has left us with no other option to be active. Being active is a mental state, but according to me being physically active is a vital factor that results in overall activeness. It can be further described by simply observing a outdoor working individual and an indoor working person. Studies show that the outdoor working individual is around 20 times more active than the one sitting in front of a computer working all-day. Talking about the olden days, almost all job sectors needed physical work which is why they were more active, but during the recent years IT jobs have taken over these sectors, and the people working here are more bound to laptops, so they barely get time to have any physical movements or exercises. The tabulated information shows the percent of poor people from different categories living in Australia. The data was taken in the year 1999 and categories were classified in seven family types. The study reveals that the majority of families of all household were living in poverty, with an approx of 11 percent, i. e. 18, 37, 000 candidates. Huge difference was observed in the case of couples with and without children, the couples with kids were living poorer than couples without kids, with a difference of 5 percent, when compared by families of the same category. In the case of aged people, a single aged person was living in more poverty than an aged couple, however the difference was not much, although it was quite recordable. On similar terms, but with increased numbers, a single person was living in more poverty than a single parent. This study not only reflects the trend of poverty between various family types, but also depicts it clearly that living in poverty cannot be completely eliminated by increasing or decreasing the members involved.
In my opinion,
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people
nowadays have become more lazy
overall
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time
as compare with that in the past. One of the major reason for this is the
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ease
of access to other entertainment sources.

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People
in the past were more productive and
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active
throughout their routine,
on the contrary
nowadays everyone is productive to an extent and needs frequent breaks during work. This necessity if felt
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because
of the various time-pass options
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people
have in
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thier
spare time.

I have
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seen
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many
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people
perform their daily activities with minimum movements.
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Lets
take an example of
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working
individuals, they complete their tasks
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by sitting in one place the whole
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time
, this generates a feeling of
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tireness
and to overcome it they prefer playing video games or scrolling through the internet in their free
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time
,
instead
of
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streaching
and moving their body. This is the
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very
main reason for being less
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active
, and during a pandemic, the way we are in
currently
has
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left
us with no other option to be active.

Being
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active
is a mental state,
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but
according to me being
physically
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active
is a vital factor that results in
overall
activeness. It can be
further
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described
by
simply
observing
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a
outdoor
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working
individual and an indoor
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working
person. Studies
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show
that the outdoor
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working
individual is around 20
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times
more
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active
than the one sitting in front of a computer
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working
all-day.

Talking about the olden days, almost all job sectors needed physical work which is why they were more
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active
,
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but
during the recent years IT jobs have taken over these sectors, and the
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people
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working
here are more bound to laptops,
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so
they
barely
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get
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time
to have any physical movements or exercises. The tabulated information
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shows
the percent of poor
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people
from
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different
categories
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living
in Australia. The data
was taken
in the year 1999 and categories
were classified
in seven
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family
types.

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The
study reveals that the majority of
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families
of all household were
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living
in
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poverty
, with an approx of 11 percent,
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18, 37, 000 candidates. Huge difference
was observed
in the case of
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couples
with and without children, the
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couples
with kids were
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living
poorer than
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couples
without kids, with a difference of 5 percent, when compared by
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families
of the same category. In the case of aged
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people
, a single aged person was
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living
in more
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poverty
than an aged
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couple
,
however
the difference was not much, although it was quite recordable. On similar terms,
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but
with increased numbers, a single person was
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living
in more
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poverty
than a single parent.

This study not
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reflects the trend of
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poverty
between various
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family
types,
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but
also
depicts it
clearly
that
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living
in
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poverty
cannot be completely eliminated by increasing or decreasing the members involved.
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IELTS essay In my opinion, people nowadays have become more lazy overall, including in their free time as compare with that in the past.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
469 words
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