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In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, dicuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions

In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, dicuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions Mnxa
Profile picture for user annatran12324 Submitted by annatran12324 on Sun, 01/20/2019 - 14: 20 The startling growth for commuters is a cause of widespread concern today, as so many people use modes of transport to move for developing the economy and society. There are a number of problems that people and environment suffer as a result of these rises, but also some straightforward measures we can take to protect ourselves. The following essay will support my opinion with additional information. Perhaps the worst problem stemming from this is the traffic snarl-up. It occurs when a volume of traffic generates demand for space greater than the available infrastructure capacity. For example, roads in my city are outdated design and inappropriate traffic mix, leading gridlock, especially in peak time if the volume of traffic has risen tremendously. A further problem is that this growth has a pessimistic consequence on air quality. Motorbikes, dominate vehicle in my country, are non-renewable source consumption and carbon dioxide emissions which contribute to climate change and global warming. Finally, there is the problem of health caused to the vehicle users of vehicle abuse. The incidence of asthma and lung cancer has increased because of inhaling the exhaust fumes released by means of transport on the road. Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is to limit the number of vehicles allowed. For instance, Singapore is to cap these quantities on its streets and harder to approval from the government to buy new cars. Secondly, we should raise awareness about using public transport among citizens via publicity and public education. Ultimately, the electric means of transport and biofuel should be prioritized. The government should implement a price control to these which may spur people to change their behavior. Overall, the problems caused are both transportation, environment and physical effects, and the solutions should involve coordinated action by individuals and the state.
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many
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people
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use
modes of
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transport
to
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move
for developing the economy and society. There are a number of
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problems
that
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people
and environment suffer
as a result
of these rises,
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but
also
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some
straightforward measures we can take to protect ourselves. The following essay will support my opinion with additional information.

Perhaps the worst
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problem
stemming from this is the
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traffic
snarl-up. It occurs when a volume of
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traffic
generates demand for space greater than the available infrastructure capacity.
For example
, roads in my city
are outdated
design and inappropriate
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traffic
mix, leading gridlock,
especially
in peak time if the volume of
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traffic
has risen
tremendously
. A
further
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problem
is that this growth has a pessimistic consequence on air quality. Motorbikes, dominate
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vehicle
in my country, are non-renewable source consumption and carbon dioxide emissions which contribute to climate
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change
and global warming.
Finally
, there is the
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problem
of health caused to the
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vehicle
users of
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vehicle
abuse. The incidence of asthma and lung cancer has increased
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because
of inhaling the exhaust fumes released by means of
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transport
on the road.

Turning to possible solutions,
probably
the most effective measure is to limit the number of
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vehicles
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allowed
.
For instance
, Singapore is to cap these quantities on its streets and harder to approval from the
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government
to
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buy
new cars.
Secondly
, we should raise awareness about using public
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transport
among citizens via publicity and public education.
Ultimately
, the electric means of
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transport
and biofuel should
be prioritized
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should implement a price control to these which may spur
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
their behavior.

Overall
, the
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problems
caused are both transportation, environment and physical effects, and the solutions should involve coordinated action by individuals and the state.
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IELTS essay In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, dicuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions

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