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In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs what are the courses of this difference ? What will be the parental roles in future?

In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs what are the courses of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future? gmOa
Parents play a central role in children's life. However, in many communities the responsibilities of mother and father are divided according to their role. In this essay I will not only discussed the duties of parents, but also represents the patenting roles in the upcoming future. Apparently, the role of mother is to nurture their child. This is because mother take care of their child, and they spend a large amount of time together, which creates emotional bonding. Besides this, mothers understand their children moods, and like and dislike as per, which creates feeling of love and affection. For instance, mother always cook their children's favorite meal, so Young's could enjoy it with ease. Although father's role is to provide financial support to their juveniles, for their holistic development. To explain further, fatherhood is based on practical approach, and they behaviours toward their wards is stringent, which is necessary for becoming better human in the society. Along with this, father provides better education to their youth, also take them for recreational activities, which helps to build better a relationship. Thus, mother's duty is give love to their youngs, and at the same time father helps their child in providing education. Paradoxically, in the future situation might change tremendously, and the chief reason for this that both parents will be working for fulfilling their child desires. In the upcoming time, mother's duties will be changed, they will not only take the responsibility of dropping their children at school, but also paying their juvenile's fees. Besides this, children will be self-reliant at the earlier age, due to their working parents. According to the recent survey has been conducted by the Children Wealth Organization reveals that, more than 65% of females hardly able to spend time with their youngs, because to they are more include in work. In contrast, fathers will take all households responsibilities. This is because both couples have hectic work schedules in the future, therefore they cook the food for family and even feed their child which helps them to maintain their Lifestyle. Hence, this will be scenerio in the future. In conclusion, parenting role role is vital for upbringing of child. Nonetheless, the circumstances will definitely changed as per their families requirements, but love and nurturing to their child will never change for the sustainable future.
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play a central
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role
in children's life.
However
, in
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many
communities the responsibilities of
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mother
and
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father
are divided
according to their
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role
. In this essay I will not
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only
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discussed
the duties of
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parents
,
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but
also
represents the patenting
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roles
in the upcoming future.

Apparently
, the
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role
of
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mother
is to nurture their
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child
. This is
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because
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mother
take care of their
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child
, and they spend a large amount of
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time
together, which creates emotional bonding.
Besides
this, mothers understand their
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children
moods, and like and dislike as per, which creates feeling of
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love
and affection.
For instance
,
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mother
always cook their children's favorite meal,
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so
Young's could enjoy it with
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ease
. Although father's
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role
is to provide financial support to their juveniles, for their holistic development. To
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explain
further
, fatherhood
is based
on practical approach, and
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they behaviours
toward their wards is stringent, which is necessary for becoming better human in the society. Along with this,
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father
provides better education to their youth,
also
take them for recreational activities, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to build better a relationship.
Thus
, mother's duty is give
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love
to their
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youngs
, and at the same
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time
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father
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helps
their
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child
in providing education.

Paradoxically
, in the future situation might
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change
tremendously
, and the chief reason for this that both
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parents
will be working for fulfilling their
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child
desires. In the upcoming
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time
, mother's duties will be
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changed
, they will not
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only
take the responsibility of dropping their
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children
at school,
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but
also
paying their juvenile's fees.
Besides
this,
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children
will be self-reliant at the earlier age, due to their working
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parents
. According to the recent survey has
been conducted
by the
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Children
Wealth Organization reveals that, more than 65% of females hardly able to spend
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time
with their
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youngs
,
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because
to they are more include in work.
In contrast
,
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fathers
will take all households responsibilities. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
both couples have hectic work schedules in the future,
therefore
they cook the food for family and even feed their
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child
which
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helps
them to maintain their Lifestyle.
Hence
, this will be
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scenerio
in the future.

In conclusion
, parenting
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role
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role
is vital for upbringing of
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child
. Nonetheless, the circumstances will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
as per their families requirements,
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but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and nurturing to their
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child
will never
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change
for the sustainable future.
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IELTS essay In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs what are the courses of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future?

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