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In most of the countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In most of the countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. with this opinion? 620j
In has been observed my a certain experts that non-native working institutions and their products become more vital in many parts of the world. Therefore, they opine that this trend have a detrimental impact on people life. If asked, I completely differ to given conception. My preference would be elaborated in the ensuing write-up. There are several valid reasons for such an inclination. The foremost one is that people have a better exposure if they work that company. By this I mean, that organization may have different ethics towers the work, because they hired workers from the various culture and counties so that the employee have a knowledge about how to deal problems by executing various steps. Also, they can improve their communication as well as vocational skills. Furthermore, by using items of them users will have ideal results. For example, herballife is foreign company inn many counties, it retails a number of products for having a healthy life-style. Though, numerous people used their local company's products for have better health; after using herballife stuff they had more striking results and now they maintain their health, prevent themselves form chronic diseases as well. To conclude, it is eventually commented that although many believe that people's life may damaged due to giving more importance to the MNGs and it products; I think citizens of that native nation have a greater experience and more positive out-comes from this.
In has
been observed
my a certain
experts
that non-native working institutions and their
products
become more vital in
many
parts of the world.
Therefore
, they opine that
this trend have
a detrimental impact on
people
life. If asked, I completely differ to
given
conception. My preference would
be elaborated
in the ensuing write-up.

There are several valid reasons for such an inclination. The foremost one is that
people
have a better exposure if they work that
company
. By this I mean, that organization may have
different
ethics towers the work,
because
they hired workers from the various culture and counties
so
that the employee have a knowledge about how to deal problems by executing various steps.
Also
, they can
improve
their communication
as well
as vocational
skills
.

Furthermore
, by using items of them users will have ideal results.
For example
,
herballife
is foreign
company
inn
many
counties, it retails a number of
products
for having a healthy life-style. Though, numerous
people
used
their local
company
's
products
for have better health; after using
herballife
stuff they had more striking results and
now
they maintain their health,
prevent
themselves form chronic diseases
as well
.

To conclude
, it is
eventually
commented that although
many
believe that
people
's life may damaged due to giving more importance to the
MNGs
and
it
products
; I
think
citizens of that native nation have a greater experience and more
positive
out-
comes
from this.
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IELTS essay In most of the countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. with this opinion?

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