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In most countries,the number of people owning their own private cars is on the rise.Is this a positive or negative development.

In most countries, the number of people owning their own private cars is on the rise. Is this a positive or negative development. Vln97
Along with the ease of buying a car, the rapid increase in our use of the cars is seem. A growing number of people attemp to buy their own cars rather than using public transport. In my perpective, this is negative development which lead to crowded ways and increasing fossils fuels worldwide. A reasonable problem that regardless of gender and age most people are enthusiastic about owning car and it generate crowded ways. A lot of people stay on the road for hour twice on day, before and after work. Before private car desire, traffic level was more tolerable than this time. Every passing day the increase in the number of cars also enhance the probability of chain accidents. Although goverments try to build new bridges, alternative roads, they can not prevent traffic in the opposite of an increasing number of personal cars. Another noticable issue is rising injurious gas levels over the world. In this occasion, most car users drive cars which work with petrol. Specially, had we look developing countries, seeing unpetrol car is impossible. Fossil gases strike out atmosphore balance and it directly effects the balance of the world. Recent 30 years, climate change increases without stopping, glaciers are melting, mass fires occur. However human can not ignore private car wish. in summarize, although visiting on owning car is more comfortable and it cause the rising the percentage of personal cars, it brings a lof of significant problems like increased traffic on the roads that depending on it increased probability of accidents and imbalance over the world in result of rising fossil gases. It is highly recommended we should prefer public transport and goverments try to rise comfort level of public transports for own citizenships.
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ease
of buying a
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car
, the rapid increase in our
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use
of the
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cars
is
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seem
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people
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attemp
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own
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cars
rather
than using public transport. In my
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perpective
, this is
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negative
development which lead to crowded ways and increasing fossils fuels worldwide. A reasonable problem that regardless of gender and age most
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people
are enthusiastic about owning
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car
and it
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generate
crowded ways.
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A lot of
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people
stay on the road for hour twice on day,
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before
and after work.
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Before
private
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car
desire, traffic level was more tolerable than this time. Every passing day the increase in the number of
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cars
also
enhance the probability of chain accidents. Although
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goverments
try to build new bridges, alternative roads, they can not
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prevent
traffic in the opposite of an increasing number of personal
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cars
. Another
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noticable
issue is rising injurious gas levels over the world. In this occasion, most
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car
users drive
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cars
which work with petrol.
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, had we look
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developing countries
, seeing
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unpetrol
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car
is impossible. Fossil gases strike out
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atmosphore
balance and it
directly
effects the balance of the world. Recent 30 years, climate
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change
increases without stopping, glaciers are melting, mass fires occur.
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However
human can not
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ignore
private
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car
wish.
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in
summarize, although visiting on owning
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car
is more comfortable and it
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cause
the rising the percentage of personal
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cars
, it brings a
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lof
of significant problems like increased traffic on the roads that depending on it increased probability of accidents and imbalance over the world in result of rising fossil gases. It is
highly
recommended we should prefer public transport and
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goverments
try to rise comfort level of public transports for
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own
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citizenships
.
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IELTS essay In most countries, the number of people owning their own private cars is on the rise. Is this a positive or negative development.

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