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environmental preservation

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Some claim that the government is responsible for environmental preservation, while others believe that everyone should be called to account. However, from my perspective, it is better for both the government and each person to work together to solve the problems. It is clear that the governments can make a great effort to help maintain the environment safe and healthy. In order to solve this issue, we will need numerous specialized equipment, high technology usage and an enormous number of experienced scientists, all of which will cost us abundantly. Furthermore, as we all know, the governments seem to possess such a huge source of finance and human resources to be able to deal with all this. For example, researchers will have to take years to collect different samples and analyze a large amount of data to find the solution to global warming. Only governments can pay and have the available funds to authorize. On the other hand, it cannot be denied that each individual can also make a significant contribution to protect our environment. All of our actions within the smallest one can be a great help to the environment such as reducing the amount of energy and water we use, using less fossil fuels, recycling trash or unused household supplies. In addition, individuals can improve the environment by decreasing the amount of garbage we throw away daily. For example, we may cut down on the quantity of plastic we use, such as plastic bottles, which are extremely harmful to the environment. In conclusion, protecting the environment is not a small mission; it involves a large volume of work, demands a massive amount of money and labors. Therefore, it is undoubted that combining the efforts of both the government and each individual will bring us the most effective result for environmental preservation.

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Some
 claim that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 is responsible for environmental preservation, while others believe that everyone should be called
 to account. However
, from my perspective, it is better for both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 and each person to work together to solve the problems.

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clear
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governments
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make
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help
 maintain the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 safe and healthy. In order to solve this issue, we will need numerous specialized equipment, high technology usage and an enormous number of experienced scientists, all of which will cost us abundantly
. Furthermore
, as we all know, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
governments
 seem to possess such a huge source of finance and human resources to be able to deal with all this. For example
, researchers will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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different
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amount
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Only
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governments
 can pay and have the available funds to authorize.

On the other hand
, it cannot be denied
 that each individual can also
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make
 a significant contribution to protect our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. All of our actions within the smallest one can be a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 such as reducing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of energy and water we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
, using less fossil fuels, recycling trash or unused household supplies. In addition
, individuals can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 by decreasing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of garbage we throw away daily. For example
, we may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down on the quantity of plastic we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
, such as plastic bottles, which are extremely
 harmful to the environment.

In conclusion
, protecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 is not a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 mission; it involves a large volume of work, demands a massive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of money and labors. Therefore
, it is undoubted
 that combining the efforts of both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 and each individual will bring us the most effective result for environmental preservation. 