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Describe talk about yourself and yourfamily

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Today I will introduce a little about myself. My full name is Nguyen Ngoc Anh Duong. I was born and raised in the last land of the country, Ca Mau. The most famous here is still seafood, especially crab. In my free time I often listen to Kpop music and BlackPink is my idol. I myself am a flexible and hardworking person, besides I am a very friendly person, I like to communicate and learn from people around me. However, one of my weaknesses is that my English is not good. I hope that with the dedicated guidance of the lecturers at Dong Thap University I will be able to improve my English level. The goal that I personally always aim for is to be able to become an enthusiastic and dedicated teacher with the profession, to be a successful person at work and to live a happy life. To be able to achieve my goals, I always set principles for myself that are to live fully, live to the fullest like the last time I lived, to know how to change myself from the smallest things. and develop good habits. That's a bit about myself, I hope with what I introduce to help you know who I am! Thank you for listening. Bye
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Today
I will introduce a
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little
about myself. My full name is Nguyen
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Ngoc
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Anh
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Duong
. I
was born
and raised in the last land of the country, Ca
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Mau
. The most
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famous
here is
still
seafood,
especially
crab. In my free time I
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often
listen to
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Kpop
music and
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BlackPink
is my idol. I myself am a flexible and hardworking person,
besides
I am a
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very
friendly person, I like to communicate and learn from
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people
around me.
However
, one of my weaknesses is that my English is not
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good
. I hope that with the dedicated guidance of the lecturers at Dong
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Thap
University I will be able to
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improve
my English level. The goal that I
personally
always aim for is to be able to become an enthusiastic and dedicated teacher with the profession, to be a successful person at work and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
a happy life. To be able to achieve my goals, I always set principles for myself that are to
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live
fully
,
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live
to the fullest like the last time I
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lived
, to know how to
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change
myself from the smallest things.
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and
develop
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good
habits. That's a bit about myself, I hope with what I introduce to
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help
you know who I am! Thank you for listening. Bye
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IELTS essay Describe talk about yourself and yourfamily

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
213 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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