Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

in many nations people are interseted to know the past history of house they are living ,what are the reason and how can do that.

in many nations people are interseted to know the past history of house they are living, what are the reason and how can do that. 0BaR1

many people are fascinated to know the past history of their present house, firstly because they are curious and wants to get more knowledge about it and can do it by exploring public records and by asking questions from the neighbors. The main reason people want to know about it is that they love to know about people who used to live there what was their lifestyle and cultural background. moreover, also to verify the structural blueprints of their building. what kind of material is used to construct it, whether is it sustainable or not. so to get an answer to their questions, people start inquiring about it in different ways. everyone has a different approach to getting a detailed history of their home such as from public records in this way they find out the detailed information about it. furthermore some people talk to nearby neighbors because they might be living at that place from a long time so they can provide a vast knowledge. To conclude, people often do research about a place before purchasing it, because they are interested in knowing past memories and about people, do it by asking nearby people.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMany
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
are fascinated
 to know the past history of their present This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, firstly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are curious and wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more knowledge about it and can do it by exploring public records and by asking questions from the neighbors.

The main reason You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 want to know about it is that they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to know about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 there what was their lifestyle and cultural background. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMoreover
moreover
, also
 to verify the structural blueprints of their building. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhat
what
 kind of material is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to construct it, whether is it sustainable or not. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 an answer to their questions, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 inquiring about it in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 ways.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterEveryone
everyone
 has a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 approach to getting a detailed history of their home such as from public records in this way they find out the detailed information about it. furthermore
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 talk to nearby neighbors This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they might be living at that place from a long time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they can provide Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "vast knowledge".vast knowledge
a vast knowledge
.

To conclude
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 do research about a place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 purchasing it, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are interested
 in knowing Consider using "memories".memories
past memories
 and about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, do it by asking nearby You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. 