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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Recent years a little number of individuals read newspapers or watch the daily news on TV over the world. There are some reasons and solutions that I will discuss. Firstly, the main reason of this process is developing technological opportunities that we can read and watch all daily news or informations. In addition, this possibility is very comfort and costless. For example, using a mobile phones is the most comfort way to receive news and informations and it has got a place in everywhere (clothes, bags and etc. ). Cost of newspapers can be another common cause of this problem. Therefore, the public figures may use a modern common devices for saving more money than buying a newspaper.

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