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in many countries the proportion of older people steadily increasing is it positive or negative

in many countries the proportion of older people steadily increasing is it positive or negative QLdY9

In many parts of the world older generation is increasing day by day. For some this situation has many advantages. But I believe that it has more negative aspects. In this essay I will explain my arguments. To begin with, if in society there are many seniors thinking way of people may not be develop, to be more precise they, prefer their own opinion, because of their stubborn character. In addition, it is harmful not only for society, bu t also it may cause some obstacles for finance of government, as authority should create conditions for them in terms of workplaces, Healthcare system and

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