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helpful staff at theater

helpful staff at theater LrJAG
I would really like to appreciate the well-being behavior of your staff whilst to the accident I met yesterday at the theater. I was a little late during the show, though I was running on the passage, while running my left leg was stuck on the stair just behind the hall gate. It stuck so terribly on the railing, leaving my leg with hairline fracture. But at the incident spot, it was your crew members who came forward and gave me a hand of help, moreover provided me the best aid they can give. They only didn’t help me on the spot, but gave me a wheelchair ride to a cab, refunding the tickets amount and want to see me again when they broadcast the same show after my recovering. I am no one to judge your hospitality but would like to add to not switch off the lights available on the hall gate to prevent the similar scenarios in the adjacent future.
I would
really
like to appreciate the well-being behavior of your staff whilst to the accident I met yesterday at the theater. I was a
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late during the
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, though I was running on the passage, while running my
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leg
was stuck
on the stair
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behind the hall gate. It stuck
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on the railing, leaving my leg with hairline fracture.
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But
at the incident spot, it was your crew members who came forward and gave me a hand of
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provided me the best aid they can give. They
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only
didn’t
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help
me on the spot,
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but
gave me a wheelchair ride to a cab, refunding the tickets amount and want to
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see
me again when they broadcast the same
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show
after my recovering.

I am no one to judge your hospitality
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but
would like to
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to not switch off the lights available on the hall gate to
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prevent
the similar scenarios in the adjacent future.
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IELTS essay helpful staff at theater

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
163 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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