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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing

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In many countries, crime is increasing day by day. They are stealing various necessary things. It is a big problem in the world. Perhaps They want to be obtained easier expensive things, maybe they have defects in their education. Most of Policemen are fighting to go down crime, but there is no more benefit to lose it Most of the innocent people are causing hardship, because of them and thief are bothering local people what do we have to do to lose it? How can we lose this illness
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countries, crime is increasing day by day. They are stealing various necessary things. It is a
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big
problem in the world. Perhaps They want to
be obtained
easier expensive things, maybe they have defects in their education.
Consider using "Most Policemen" or "Most of the Policemen".
Most of Policemen
are fighting to go down crime,
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but
there is no more benefit to lose it Most of the innocent
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people
are causing hardship,
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because
of them and thief are bothering local
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people
what do we
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have to
do to lose it? How can we lose this
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illness

IELTS essay In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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