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Communication Technology in Modern Society

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Due to advances in science and technology, the lifestyle of people everywhere in the world has become similar. Is this a positive or a negative development? It is a shocking reality that people in the world can now be connected seamlessly through modern communicative technologies such as mobile phones and high-speed broadband services. Just a few decades ago, people would not have been able to imagine that one day they would be able to use a telephone without a visible wire tethering them to the
Due to advances in science and technology, the lifestyle of
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people
everywhere in the world has become similar. Is this a
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positive
or a
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negative
development?

It is a shocking reality that
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people
in the world can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
be connected
seamlessly
through modern communicative technologies such as mobile phones and high-speed broadband services.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
a few decades ago,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
would not have been able to imagine that one day they would be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a telephone without a visible wire tethering them to the

IELTS essay Communication Technology in Modern Society

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
84 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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