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In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this? qVa65
With increase in global population, there has been significant increase is amount of trash produced now a days. It has lead to various environmental concerns, yet people around the world fail to dispose of there trash in ecofriendly manner due to various reasons shall now to discussed. Primarily, the main reason behind this is lethargy or lack of knowledge among individuals, means the trash that could have been recycled is berried under landfills. The other reason is lack of recycling centers. To combat this situation educating people regarding importance of recycling is important. Providing people more resources such as separated bins for trash. Moreover, fine can be enforced to people fail to sort there trash properly. Hand in hand more recycling centers can be made available.
With increase in global population, there has been significant increase is amount of
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trash
produced
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now a days
. It has lead to various environmental concerns,
yet
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people
around the world fail to dispose of there
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trash
in
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ecofriendly
manner due to various reasons shall
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Primarily
, the main reason behind this is lethargy or lack of knowledge among individuals, means the
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trash
that could have
been recycled
is berried
under landfills. The other reason is lack of recycling centers. To combat this situation educating
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people
regarding importance of recycling is
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important
. Providing
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people
more resources such as separated bins for
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trash
.
Moreover
, fine can
be enforced
to
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people
fail to sort there
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trash
properly
. Hand in hand more recycling centers can
be made
available.

IELTS essay In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

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