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In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this? 0O2l
Indeed, developing countries do not recycle their used material because it is not accessible technology to get the benefit of things like glass paper and metal. unfortunately, their's administration does not priority to counter this crisis by dint of we are facing this problem in along duration. however, this issue is not only polluted the atmosphere but also is caused by many diseases. thus the drive of countries is unable to control this menace due to the lack of attention. That is why we are not getting success on this topic. Similarly, we can obtain many advantages to recycle process as the developed nations are using recycle their used materials in term of making electricity and also a lot of things etc. In this way, they are keeping the environment clean and safe. This action is prevented from lethal infection. therefore, it is proved the act of recycling the waste substance we can earn some wealth but it is a blessing of making neat and clean on the planet. I think, in this twenty-first century we can easily solve this case. it is alone essential of will power and strategy which is not seeing in the under developing states because of this we are moving concurrently unsolved dilemma yet. in the short, if we want to find out the treatment of the disease, we dire need a serious plan and strategy, otherwise, we are not able to counter this threat. Last, it is not issued to recycle used material because we can comfortably recycle waste manipulated element through modern technology. It is trying to comprehend the process of recycling how largely it is important for us.
Indeed
,
developing countries
do not
recycle
their
used
material
because
it is not accessible technology to
get
the benefit of things like
glass paper
and metal.
unfortunately
,
their's
administration does not priority to counter this crisis by dint of we are facing this problem in along duration.
however
, this issue is not
only
polluted the atmosphere
but
also
is caused
by
many
diseases.
thus
the drive of countries is unable to control this menace due to the lack of attention.
That is
why we are not getting success on this topic.

Similarly
, we can obtain
many
advantages to
recycle
process as the developed nations are using
recycle
their
used
materials in term of making electricity and
also
a lot of
things etc. In this way, they are keeping the environment clean and safe. This action is
prevented
from lethal infection.
therefore
, it
is proved
the act of recycling the waste substance we can earn
some
wealth
but
it is a blessing of making neat and clean on the planet.

I
think
, in this twenty-
first
century we can
easily
solve this case.
it
is alone essential of will power and strategy which is not seeing in the under developing states
because of this
we are moving
concurrently
unsolved dilemma
yet
.
in
the short, if we want to find out the treatment of the disease,
we dire
need a serious plan and strategy,
otherwise
, we are not able to counter this threat.

Last, it is not issued to
recycle
used
material
because
we can
comfortably
recycle
waste manipulated element through modern technology. It is trying to comprehend the process of recycling how
largely
it is
important
for us.
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IELTS essay In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

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