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In many countries nowadays, people still live with their parents after marriage and also after having children. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

In many countries nowadays, people still live with their parents after marriage and also after having children. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages? NrKVq
In recent times, several individuals from around the world still live with their parents even after their marriage and having a child. Although it is stated that youngsters living with their parents have to deal with certain drawbacks, it is also argued that there are innumerous advantages when people live with their parents after getting married. This essay will demonstrate both the positives and the negatives of the people who live with their parents, though I personally feel it is an advantage because both the parents and the individuals will be benefitted from this. On the one hand, there are crucial advantages linked when people live in a joint family. Considering the perspective of the parents, they are looked after during their old age days. In India, for instance, parents usually live with their offsprings and are not left in aged care homes, as this helps them to be taken care of by their children and grandchildren at the time when they feel low. In addition to this, looking into the children’s point of view, they are supported either financially or with a piece of advice. Even though people who are married are matured enough to make their own decisions, they still need advice from an experienced person during their difficult time; and this is where parents come into their support. Finally, living in a joint family would help the grandchildren as well. As they are fostered by their grandparents and not in a daycare centre, which also indirectly helps the individual to save on their finances. Clearly, there are innumerous advantages when people live with their parents even after getting married. On the other hand, despite the advantages, there are some disadvantages related to being a part of the joint family. Although joint families would help in advising and in monetary aspects, it also affects the privacy of a couple. In many cultures, for instance, many newly wedded couple’s marriages have failed because they did not have their privacy whilst having to live in a joint family. Moreover, many a time, there are arguments which take place when individuals live with their parents after being married and having children. This may cause problems such as loss of peace at home and also impact the mental health of the child. In short, youngsters living with their parents after marriage may have to face certain problems. In conclusion, even though there are advantages and disadvantages associated when people decided to live with their parents. I, however, believe that when people live with their parents it is advantageous. As this would help all three generations and also develop a positive bonding amongst themselves.
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individuals
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parents
even after their marriage and having a child. Although it
is stated
that youngsters living with their
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parents
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have to
deal with certain drawbacks, it is
also
argued that there are
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innumerous
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advantages
when
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people
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live
with their
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parents
after getting married. This essay will demonstrate both the positives and the negatives of the
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people
who
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live
with their
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parents
, though I
personally
feel it is an
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advantage
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because
both the
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parents
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benefitted
from this.

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advantages
linked when
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people
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in a
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joint
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family
. Considering the perspective of the
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parents
, they
are looked
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old
age days. In India,
for instance
,
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parents
usually
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live
with their
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offsprings
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left
in aged care homes, as this
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helps
them to
be taken
care of by their children and grandchildren at the
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time
when they feel low.
In addition
to this, looking into the children’s point of view, they
are supported
either
financially
or with a piece of advice.
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people
who
are married
are matured
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enough
to
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make
their
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decisions, they
still
need advice from an experienced person during their difficult
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; and this is where
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parents
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come
into their support.
Finally
, living in a
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joint
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family
would
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help
the grandchildren
as well
. As they
are fostered
by their grandparents and not in a daycare
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, which
also
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helps
the
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individual
to save on their finances.
Clearly
, there are
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innumerous
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advantages
when
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people
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live
with their
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parents
even after getting married.

On the other hand
, despite the
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advantages
, there are
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some
disadvantages related to being a part of the
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joint
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family
. Although
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joint
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families
would
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help
in advising and in monetary aspects, it
also
affects the privacy of a couple. In
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many
cultures,
for instance
,
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many
newly
wedded couple’s marriages have failed
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because
they did not have their privacy whilst having to
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family
.
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, there are arguments which take place when
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individuals
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live
with their
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parents
after
being married
and having children. This may cause problems such as loss of peace at home and
also
impact the mental health of the child. In short, youngsters living with their
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parents
after marriage may
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have to
face certain problems.

In conclusion
,
even though
there are
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advantages
and disadvantages associated when
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people
decided to
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live
with their
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parents
. I,
however
, believe that when
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people
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live
with their
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parents
it is advantageous. As this would
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help
all three generations and
also
develop a
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positive
bonding amongst themselves.
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IELTS essay In many countries nowadays, people still live with their parents after marriage and also after having children. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
441 words
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