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In many countries, it is common for families to own and run their own business. Some people think that this is the best way to run business while, other think this is a potential source of problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In many countries, it is common for families to own and run their own business. Some people think that this is the best way to run business while, other think this is a potential source of problem. with this statement. kN2K
In today’s runaway life, every person tries his best for a good future, which includes a job or doing his own employment. It is generally seen that people run their household work for a good income, while a number of people believe that parentage employment is the most essential means of creating a problem. Although, I agree and believe that there are numerous benefits associated with this trend, the difficulties arising from this cannot be ignored. First, having one's owned a household profession in a family proves to financially beneficial due to the fact, people living in the same ménage are entitled to all the benefits of every pursuit. Apart from this, trade is in the minds of the people of the house, of which the possibility of any kind of scam in the menage will be negligible. For example, the entire field of Reliance Company has set up by the Ambani family, in which they are fully aware of any kind of future impact on their particular pursuit, and any financial hardship that they face. It becomes very easy to deal with that. Conversely, interruption in the ménage business causes the whole brood to become distraught and can read them experiencing feelings such as personal stress, which sometimes leads to a worsening condition, after which it emerges as a scattered family. Secondly, when any difficulty or challenge arises on the relations of the employment, then the people of the household, who are making a full contribution in running that métier, do not even get a chance to spend time with their relatives. After all, the consequences are never good for the broods, and the internal problems in the relations such as fighting quarrels and the power of companionship start diminishing. In the end, taking all things into consideration, it concludes that all the credits and losses of several kinds of profit and loss from a family pursuit goes to the family members. According to my personal advice, every person should keep aside from his business and domestic issues and move forward in life, consequently that any future problems may not affect the people living in the same house.
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good
future, which includes a job or doing his
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own
employment. It is
generally
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seen
that
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people
run their household work for a
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good
income, while a number of
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people
believe that parentage employment is the most essential means of creating a problem. Although, I
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agree
and believe that there are numerous benefits associated with this trend, the difficulties arising from this cannot be
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ignored
.

First
, having one's
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owned
a household profession in a
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family
proves to
financially
beneficial due to the fact,
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people
living in the same ménage
are entitled
to all the benefits of every pursuit. Apart from this, trade is in the minds of the
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people
of the
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house
, of which the possibility of any kind of scam in the
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menage
will be negligible.
For example
, the entire field of Reliance
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Company
has set up by the
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Ambani
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family
, in which they are
fully
aware of any kind of future impact on their particular pursuit, and any financial hardship that they face. It becomes
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very
easy to deal with that.

Conversely
, interruption in the ménage business causes the whole brood to become distraught and can read them experiencing feelings such as personal
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stress
, which
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sometimes
leads to a worsening condition, after which it emerges as a scattered
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family
.
Secondly
, when any difficulty or challenge arises on the relations of the employment, then the
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people
of the household, who are making a full contribution in running that métier, do not even
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get
a chance to spend time with their relatives.
After all
, the consequences are never
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good
for the broods, and the internal problems in the relations such as fighting quarrels and the power of companionship
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start
diminishing.

In the
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end
, taking all things into consideration, it concludes that all the credits and losses of several kinds of profit and loss from a
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family
pursuit goes to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
members. According to my personal advice, every person should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
aside from his business and domestic issues and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
forward in life,
consequently
that any future problems may not affect the
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people
living in the same
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house
.
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IELTS essay In many countries, it is common for families to own and run their own business. Some people think that this is the best way to run business while, other think this is a potential source of problem. with this statement.

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