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In many countries international tourist is increasing day by day what are advantages and disadvantages

In many countries international tourist is increasing day by day what are advantages and disadvantages olab

The advancement in technology and transportation, it made the life easier of those who love to travel from one side to other. It is believed by few individuals that tourism place a vital role in economic growth of any nation while it might bad impact on a biosphere which is very important for human so that's why I think disadvantages over weigh the advantages. I will shed light on both views and will discuss about my view in upcoming paragraphs. The main benefit of international journey is that progress in a money of country. Due to the fact that when any person travel from one state to other than he have to spent the cash on large things like food, ticket, hotel, transport etcetera. Consequently his expenditure added in the treasure of a government. For example, when any foreigner come to the India, he prefer to reside in a 5 star hotel rather than with the local people. Hence tourism is source of economic growth of state. As every rose has its own thorn similarly it has demerit also as worldwide exploration is not good for environment because the visitors does not follow the values, rules and regulation as they obey in their own state related to environment. Therefore this increase the pollution. For instance, when the site -sees come to see de sukhna lake in Chandigarh(India) then they throw the garbage in lake which suffice water contaminated. Hence, global holiday business is dangerous for local habitat. By considering all the facts, the tourism is just bliss-less for a biosphere because it to create a rubbish in environment. On the other hand, it is helpful for economic growth. Therefore the advantages of tourism can be overlooked by its disadvantages.

The advancement in technology and transportation, it made the life easier of those who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to travel from one side to other. It is believed
 by few individuals that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
 place a vital role in economic growth of any nation while it might This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 impact on a biosphere which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for human This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that's why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 disadvantages over weigh the advantages. I will shed light on both views and will Did you mean simply "discuss my"? You do not need the word "about" here.discuss my
discuss about my
 view in upcoming paragraphs.

The main benefit of international journey is that progress in Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "money".money
a money
 of country. Due to the fact that when any person travel from one state to other than he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
Did you mean "to spend"?to spend
to spent
 the cash on large things like food, ticket, hotel, transport etcetera. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 his expenditure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the treasure of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
. For example
, when any foreigner This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to the India, he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "prefers", "preferred".preferspreferred
prefer
 to reside in a '5 star' is missing a hyphen.5-star
5 star
 hotel rather
 than with the local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
 is source of economic growth of state.

As every rose has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 thorn similarly
 it has demerit also
 as worldwide exploration is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for environment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the visitors does not follow the values, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and regulation as they obey in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 state related to environment. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 this increase the pollution. For instance
, when the site -This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnesses
sees
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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de
Possible spelling mistake found.SusanaSakha
sukhna
 lake in Chandigarh(India) then they throw the garbage in lake which suffice water contaminated. Hence
, global holiday business is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 for local habitat.

By considering all the facts, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 bliss-less for a biosphere This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it to create a rubbish in environment. On the other hand
, it is helpful for economic growth. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 the advantages of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
 can be overlooked
 by its disadvantages. 