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In many countries good school and medical facilities are available only in cities.

In many countries good school and medical facilities are available only in cities. mbJ6L
In this proliferating population, the provisions in urban cities are well advanced as compared to conventional times. Whereas, the countryside areas are still struggling with different problems such as good school and medical facilities. Consequently, some individuals claim that teachers and doctors who have recently joined ought to work in rural areas, while others believe that they should have freedom to work. Nevertheless, I strongly opine that both points have their own significance.
In this proliferating population, the provisions in urban cities are well advanced as compared to conventional times. Whereas, the countryside areas are
still
struggling with
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different
problems such as
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good
school and medical facilities.
Consequently
,
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some
individuals claim that teachers and doctors who have recently
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joined
ought to work in rural areas, while others believe that they should have freedom to work.
Nevertheless
, I
strongly
opine that both points have their
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own
significance.
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IELTS essay In many countries good school and medical facilities are available only in cities.

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73 words
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