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In life, we as a human just planning for our future but God is the one whon deciding it. There's numerous plan or dream that we can't achieved and that it's sucks for a lot of people. Because when we get in one bad situation we think that we are not a succesful man and we can't get happy for our life. But some people believe that it is best to accept that kind of situation.  The good impact from accept the bad situation in life is we can get more genuine when we facing the same situation next. We know how to handle it. Other good impact is sometimes there's something unexpected moment while we get in this situation. For example, my father's friend is working at company that doesn't make him satisfied with his job. But the unexpected moment is he need to enjoy doing his job because when he coming home he got happy that he can meet with his family.

In life, we as a human just planning for our future but God is the one whon deciding it. There's numerous plan or dream that we can't achieved and that it's sucks for a lot of people. Because when we get in one bad situation we think that we are not a succesful man and we can't get happy for our life. But some people believe that it is best to accept that kind of situation. The good impact from accept the bad situation in life is we can get more genuine when we facing the same situation next. We know how to handle it. Other good impact is sometimes there's something unexpected moment while we get in this situation. For example, my father's friend is working at company that doesn't make him satisfied with his job. But the unexpected moment is he need to enjoy doing his job because when he coming home he got happy that he can meet with his family. l0Rb
In life, we as a human just planning for our future but God is the one whon deciding it. There's numerous plan or dream that we can't achieved and that it's sucks for a lot of people. Because when we get in one bad situation we think that we are not a succesful man and we can't get happy for our life. But some people believe that it is best to accept that kind of situation. The good impact from accept the bad situation in life is we can get more genuine when we facing the same situation next. We know how to handle it. Other good impact is sometimes there's something unexpected moment while we get in this situation. For example, my father's friend is working at company that doesn't make him satisfied with his job. But the unexpected moment is he need to enjoy doing his job because when he coming home he got happy that he can meet with his family.
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happy for our life.
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believe that it is best to accept that kind of situation.

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in life is we can
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him satisfied with his job.
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the unexpected moment is he need to enjoy doing his job
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IELTS essay In life, we as a human just planning for our future but God is the one whon deciding it. There's numerous plan or dream that we can't achieved and that it's sucks for a lot of people. Because when we get in one bad situation we think that we are not a succesful man and we can't get happy for our life. But some people believe that it is best to accept that kind of situation. The good impact from accept the bad situation in life is we can get more genuine when we facing the same situation next. We know how to handle it. Other good impact is sometimes there's something unexpected moment while we get in this situation. For example, my father's friend is working at company that doesn't make him satisfied with his job. But the unexpected moment is he need to enjoy doing his job because when he coming home he got happy that he can meet with his family.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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