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In life, we as a human just planning for our future but God is the one who deciding it. There's numerous plan or dream that we can't achieve and that it's sucks for a lot of people. Because when we get in one bad situation we think that we are not a successful man and we can't get happy for our life. But a number ofpeople believe that it is best to accept that kind of situation. The good impact from accept the bad situation in life is we can get more genuine when we're facing the same situation next. We know how to handle it. Other good impact is sometimes there's something unexpected moment while we get in this situation. For example, my father's friend is working at company that doesn't make him satisfied with his job. But the unexpected moment is he need to enjoy doing his job because when he is coming home he got happy that he can meet with his family. In contrast, the bad impact from get in bad situations is a number of people that can't handle this situation is can get easily

In life, we as a human just planning for our future but God is the one who deciding it. There's numerous plan or dream that we can't achieve and that it's sucks for a lot of people. Because when we get in one bad situation we think that we are not a successful man and we can't get happy for our life. But a number ofpeople believe that it is best to accept that kind of situation. The good impact from accept the bad situation in life is we can get more genuine when we're facing the same situation next. We know how to handle it. Other good impact is sometimes there's something unexpected moment while we get in this situation. For example, my father's friend is working at company that doesn't make him satisfied with his job. But the unexpected moment is he need to enjoy doing his job because when he is coming home he got happy that he can meet with his family. In contrast, the bad impact from get in bad situations is a number of people that can't handle this situation is can get easily stress and that is not good for their mental health. They always overthink about this bad situation in their life and it's hard to get happy because they can't enjoy like other people. In conclusion, some people think that it is best for accept a bad situation but a number of people can't handle this situation. And from my opinion is don't get too long in a bad situation, when you are not happy just let it go all that things that, try to doing other activities that makes you relax, such as do your hobbies.

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