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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why this is so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

Generally, intimate connection is less common now among neighborhoods in comparison to the past. This essay will discuss the problem that is a busy routine, and the solution which is to set any suitable time weekly. The biggest problematic thing is that these days people have a shortage of time. This means that people have a tough routine and do not have much time for each other because they have a lot of work to do, and they become just like a machine. Moreover, they spend more time on the latest gadgets, but they give less time to people who are sitting beside them. According to a survey conducted by York University, Canada reveals that more than 80 percent of people are so far away from their family members, and closer to the people who are added to their social media. However, this can be resolved. The most suitable measure is that to set a specific time in a day to meet them and set that time when everyone can be easily available. In other words, if people organize an event on a weekly basis, they can also enjoy it as well as the distance will become lesser and lesser. This idea was tested back in 2018 in a residential place in Canada, and it brings many fruitful results that reveal that it overcome 80% stress ratio among residents. This was found beneficial there if every country adopts this technique; this will be helpful for them to overcome most of the social problems. In conclusion, the problem of distance among citizens living near is due to the unavailability of excessive time, but it can be overcome by a strategy to conduct an event week wise which is proven by a valid test.
Generally
, intimate connection is less common
now
among neighborhoods
in comparison
to the past. This essay will discuss the problem
that is
a busy routine, and the solution which is to set any suitable
time
weekly.

The biggest problematic thing is that these days
people
have a shortage of
time
. This means that
people
have a tough routine and do not have much
time
for each other
because
they have
a lot of
work to do, and they become
just
like a machine.
Moreover
, they spend more
time
on the latest gadgets,
but
they give less
time
to
people
who are sitting beside them. According to a survey conducted by York University, Canada reveals that more than 80 percent of
people
are
so
far away from their family members, and closer to the
people
who are
added
to their social media.
However
, this can
be resolved
.

The most suitable measure is that to set a specific
time
in a day to
meet
them and set that
time
when everyone can be
easily
available.
In other words
, if
people
organize an
event
on a weekly basis, they can
also
enjoy it
as well
as the distance will become lesser and lesser. This
idea
was
tested
back in 2018 in a residential place in Canada, and it brings
many
fruitful results that reveal that it overcome 80%
stress
ratio among residents. This
was found
beneficial there if every country adopts this technique; this will be helpful for them to overcome most of the social problems.

In conclusion
, the problem of distance among citizens living near is due to the unavailability of excessive
time
,
but
it can
be overcome
by a strategy to conduct an
event
week wise which
is proven
by a valid
test
.
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IELTS essay In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why this is so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.5
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