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Some think that buildings should be constructed with functionality in mind, as it is more important than design. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Architecture is undeniably an art form. However, in order to design ‘the perfect project’, an architect has to consider not only its aesthetic appearance but also how the building serves its users. As both aspects are important, surely a successful designer has to favor one aspect before the other. The hallmark of great architecture is how well the building is perceived throughout the time. Sistine Chapel in the Vatican, Guggenheim Museum in the USA, and CCTV Headquarters in China are all well-known by most people living today despite the fact that all of them were built in different eras. The trait they have in common is all of these buildings are sights to behold. Aesthetic design influences how people perceive things, and humankind always responds well to a good form of art. Human beings, ever since the beginning of time, have been continually looking for ways to improve their lives through artform. Be that as it may, any beautiful object is useless if it does not serve its purposes. The Vessel in New York City is a 150-foot spiraling staircase built for tourist attraction and interactive public space. As attractive a structure as it be, it had been the choice of location for three suicides in less than a year as the safety barrier is too easy to be climbed over. As a result, the establishment is closed indefinitely until the owner has resolved this issue. Furthermore, elaborate designs require special techniques and careful considerations. Failure to address these concerns could affect how a building operates, as happened in The Walt Disney Concert Hall. The metallic cladding which covers most of the concert hall’s facade produced excessive glare which then caused a significant rise in temperature and glare that risked traffic accidents. Subsequently, a huge amount of money had to be spent to solve these problems. ‘Form follows function’ is the main design philosophy that drives modern architecture into its stature today. Architects should always start their projects by focusing on a structure’s main function and purposes and its exterior form should reflect a building’s activity inside its walls while always complying with safety regulations and guidelines.
Architecture is
undeniably
an art form.
However
, in order to
design
‘the perfect project’, an architect
has to
consider not
only
its aesthetic appearance
but
also
how the
building
serves its users. As both aspects are
important
,
surely
a successful designer
has to
favor one aspect
before
the other.

The hallmark of great architecture is how well the
building
is perceived
throughout the time. Sistine Chapel in the Vatican, Guggenheim Museum in the USA, and CCTV Headquarters in China are all well-known by most
people
living
today
despite the fact that all of them
were built
in
different
eras. The trait they have in common is all of these
buildings
are sights to behold. Aesthetic
design
influences how
people
perceive things, and humankind always responds well to a
good
form of art. Human beings, ever since the beginning of time, have been
continually
looking for ways to
improve
their
lives
through
artform
.

Be that as it may, any
beautiful
object is useless if it does not serve its purposes. The Vessel in New York City is a 150-foot spiraling staircase built for tourist attraction and interactive public space. As attractive a structure as it be, it had been the choice of location for three suicides in less than a year as the safety barrier is too easy to
be climbed
over.
As a result
, the establishment
is closed
indefinitely
until the owner has resolved this issue.
Furthermore
, elaborate
designs
require special techniques and careful considerations. Failure to address these concerns could affect how a
building
operates, as happened in The Walt Disney Concert Hall. The metallic cladding which covers most of the concert hall’s facade produced excessive glare which then caused a significant rise in temperature and glare that risked traffic accidents.
Subsequently
, a huge amount of money had to
be spent
to solve these problems.

‘Form follows function’ is the main
design
philosophy that drives modern architecture into its stature
today
. Architects should always
start
their projects by focusing on a structure’s main function and purposes and its exterior form should reflect a
building’s
activity inside its walls while always complying with safety regulations and guidelines.
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IELTS essay Some think that buildings should be constructed with functionality in mind, as it is more important than design.

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