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In developing countries people are buying cars for the first time. What problems can cause? Is there any possible solutions?

In developing countries people are buying cars for the first time. What problems can cause? Is there any possible solutions? NreQy

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many
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. As a consequence streets all owe The extreme adjective for crowded is "packed".packed
extremely crowded
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cars
 suffer fewer deaths journey pedestrians to be at several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
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only
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people
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use
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because
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people
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government
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cars
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many
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prevent
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, despite rising number of after my bills This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
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