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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay this care, the government or the family?

In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay this care, the government or the family? NE12

Most of the people in Britain when their parent gets old they send it to elderly homes with others seniors. Where as nurses take good care of them, yet sometimes the government has to pay for this. I think the government should responsible for this matter. The reason why sending their elders in asylum because of busyness. Nowadays people tend to prospecting works and get self a full time work to buy their needs and wants. Individuals can rely on government by asking financial support, since this is a serious problem. Government can invest money from our taxes, and by funds this will create public services, for example, hospitals, school and home for elderly. Hospitals for people who cannot afford medicines and vitamins. School with free books and uniforms, so children will focus on academic skills not in how they afford the things they needed. Home for elderly, They had been paying their taxes from young adult until there sixty's. The government should give importance to senior citizens, for paying their caregivers and medicines. Therefore, The government has responsible by giving financial support and place where elders can stay in the place without thinking of any expenses.

Most of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in Britain when their parent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 it to elderly homes with others seniors. Did you mean "Whereas"?Whereas
Where as
 nurses take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 care of them, yet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 pay for this. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should responsible for this matter.

The reason why sending their elders in asylum This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of busyness. Nowadays This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 tend to prospecting works and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 self a full time work to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 their needs and wants. Individuals can rely on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 by asking financial support, since this is a serious problem.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 can invest money from our taxes, and by funds this will create public services, for example
, hospitals, school and home for elderly. Hospitals for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who cannot afford medicines and vitamins. School with free books and uniforms, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 children will focus on academic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 not in how they afford the things they needed. Home for elderly, They had been paying their taxes from young adult until there sixty's. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should give importance to senior citizens, for paying their caregivers and medicines.

Therefore
, The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 has responsible by giving financial support and place where elders can stay in the place without thinking of any expenses. 