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Some people believe that nowdays we have to many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that nowdays we have to many choices. with this statement? qdmw
In the world full of technology humans beings have pelhotra of options to make thier life pleasant. First, in this modern technology perdons look after plenty of varieties to make thier life convient. So they always look for a better option to make thier effort in a easy way. Here, Persons had huge variety of products in the market so while purchasing it they can check it throughly then afterwards they can have it and at the same time if they do not like item they consumed and if there a looking to return it here sometimes it is highly impossible the product due to no exchange of the product. However, they has only one option to chose the correct product they are looking for if it is not available in the supermarket then they can order to shop owner to come with thier wish material. For instance, in this 21st century everyone knows how to control the digital screen so they can go through business websites to purchase the product. Here the online shopping not only come with numerous varieties even it comes with plenty of colors and sizes so it easy to look at the needy one. Through digital shopping one can select the product here they had many option to save the product in cart and afterwards they can look after it so it make thier selection a convient way. After purchasing the product if they unlike it then they can go for exchange product till a week of its purchase. Here, the citizens made thier life easy owning to the fact that everything is available infront of them due to digitalization. On contrast they were going for huge varieties even they do not it to have. And I would like to say that this digital world making humans more lazy consequently even they can not complete thier work in proper way. For example, many adults who are in a work they have mobile in their hands upto office hours. Here while going through work at the same time they look in to digital shopping to own the discounts and about new arrival by this they lack in concentration from the work. To conclude, though citizens have pelhotra of varieties in front of their eyes, while shopping they should go in a proper way to buy the product that is usable for them in the future.
In the world full of technology
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humans beings
have
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pelhotra
of
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options
to
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make
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thier
life pleasant.

First
, in this modern technology
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perdons
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look
after
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plenty
of
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varieties
to
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make
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thier
life
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convient
.
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So
they always
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look
for a better
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option
to
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make
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thier
effort
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in a easy way
. Here, Persons had huge
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variety
of
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products
in the market
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so
while purchasing it they can
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check
it
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throughly
then afterwards they can have it and at the same time if they do not like item they consumed and if
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there a
looking to return it here
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sometimes
it is
highly
impossible the
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product
due to no exchange of the
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product
.
However
, they
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has
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only
one
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option
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to chose
the correct
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product
they are looking for if it is not available in the supermarket then they can order
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to shop
owner to
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come
with
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thier
wish material.

For instance
, in this 21st century everyone knows how to control the digital screen
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so
they can go through business websites to
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purchase
the
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product
. Here the online
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shopping
not
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only
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come
with numerous
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varieties
even it
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comes
with
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plenty
of colors and sizes
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so
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it
easy to
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look
at the needy one. Through digital
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shopping
one can select the
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product
here they had
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many
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option
to save the
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product
in cart and afterwards they can
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look
after it
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so
it
Did you mean "makes"?
make
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thier
selection a
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convient
way. After purchasing the
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product
if they unlike it then they can go for exchange
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product
till a week of its
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purchase
.

Here, the citizens made
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thier
life easy owning to the fact that everything is available
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infront
of them due to digitalization. On
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contrast they
were going for huge
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varieties
even they do not it to have. And I would like to say that this digital world making humans more lazy
consequently
even they can not complete
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thier
work in proper way.

For example
,
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many
adults who are in a work they have mobile in their hands
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upto
office hours. Here while going through work at the same time they
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look
in to digital
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shopping
to
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own
the discounts and about new arrival by this they lack in concentration from the work.

To conclude
, though citizens have
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pelhotra
of
The usual preposition for "varieties" is "of" not "in." Revise: "varieties of".
varieties in
front of their eyes, while
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shopping
they should go
Consider replacing "in a proper way" with the adverb for "proper"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a proper way
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
that is
usable for them in the future.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowdays we have to many choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
399 words
5.5
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