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In an essay of about 250 words, discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment.

In an essay of about 250 words, discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment. 8JYEw
Living in an apartment has been a social trend for the past decades, many people tend to choose apartments over houses. Oblivious, both are a great choice to live, as well as having differentdifference pros and cons. In This essay today, I’ll discuss apartments. It’s better than a house? First of all, an apartment is considered a safe place to live inaccommodation. All apartments have at least a securityrestriction system, which is controlled by a group of guards. They will guard outside the entrance or sit in the office using an observation camera system which is placed in the floor lobby and elevator. Subsequently, Thiefs or bad guys can’t break in easily, the security system will resolve your worry. Second, most citizenscitizen want to live in a good environment and a high apartment will respond to their request. For instance, my friend Hưng has lived in an apartment for 5 years, he lives on the 27th floor. Everyday he spend 30 min meditating on the balcony, the fresh air and clear sky view make Hung relaxed and reduce mental issues. Otherwise we can reduce the interaction with dust and toxic released from the ground and rebuilt our healthy respiratory. Alternatively, residing in apartmentsapartment may have somemay also contain some annoying problems. First, unpleasant neighbourhoods areneighbourhood is one of the most common issuesissue here. Given that you live in a group of people, you have to familiarize yourself with different social figures. Therefore, you will deal with somedeal some disturbing neighborsneighbour, who can make loud noisesnoise or become unfriendly to you. Yet, you have to suffer and share the neighbour issue with. In other words, your neighbour can share power outagesoutage and lack of water with you. Last but not least, your privacy mightprivacypersionalize might be disturbedlimited. Each resident is provided a certainprovided certain area, expanding the area space is bound, you will find it much inconvenient to decorate your small flat. In addition, residentsresident also have to follow many resident general rules, sometimes these regulations make your private life strict and uncomfortable. In particular, a large number of apartments where pets are prohibited, animal lovers have no choice but to movemoving to a normalto normal house where they can have freedombe freedom and do what they want.
Living in an
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apartment
has been a social trend for the past decades,
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many
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people
tend to choose
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apartments
over
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houses
. Oblivious, both are a great choice to
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live
,
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as well as
having
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differentdifference
pros and cons. In This essay
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today
, I’ll discuss
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apartments
. It’s better than a
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house
?

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, an
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apartment
is considered
a safe place to
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live
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inaccommodation
. All
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apartments
have at least a
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securityrestriction
system, which
is controlled
by a group of guards. They will guard outside the entrance or sit in the office using an observation camera system which
is placed
in the floor lobby and elevator.
Subsequently
,
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Thiefs
or
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bad
guys can’t break in
easily
, the security system will resolve your worry.

Second, most
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citizenscitizen
want to
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live
in a
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good
environment and a high
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apartment
will respond to their request.
For instance
, my friend
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Hưng
has
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lived
in an
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apartment
for 5 years, he
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lives
on the 27th floor.
'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean "every day, he"?
Everyday he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "spends", "spent".
spend
30 min meditating on the balcony, the fresh air and
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clear
sky view
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make
Hung relaxed and
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reduce
mental issues.
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Otherwise
we can
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reduce
the interaction with dust and toxic released from the ground and rebuilt our healthy respiratory.

Alternatively
, residing in
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apartmentsapartment
may have
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somemay
also
contain
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some
annoying problems.
First
, unpleasant
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neighbourhoods
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areneighbourhood
is one of the most common
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issuesissue
here.
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Given
that you
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live
in a group of
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people
, you
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have to
familiarize yourself with
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different
social figures.
Therefore
, you will deal with
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somedeal
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some
disturbing
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neighborsneighbour
, who can
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make
loud
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noisesnoise
or become
unfriendly
to you.
Yet
, you
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have to
suffer and share the
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neighbour
issue with.
In other words
, your
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neighbour
can share power
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outagesoutage
and lack of water with you.

Last
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but
not least, your privacy
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mightprivacypersionalize
might be
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disturbedlimited
. Each resident
is provided
a
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certainprovided
certain area, expanding the area space
is bound
, you will find it much inconvenient to decorate your
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small
flat.
In addition
,
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residentsresident
also
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have to
follow
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many
resident general
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rules
,
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sometimes
these regulations
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make
your private life strict and uncomfortable.
In particular
,
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a large number of
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apartments
where pets
are prohibited
, animal lovers have no choice
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but
to
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movemoving
to a
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normalto
normal
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house
where they can have
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freedombe
freedom and do what they want.

IELTS essay In an essay of about 250 words, discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
377 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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