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In a study of the reading habits of Waymarsh citizens conducted by the University of Waymarsh most respondents said that they preferred literary classics as reading material However a second study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of b

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It is stated in the passage that, according to first study reading habit of Waymarsh Citizen is literary classic but another study shows that their reading habit is mystery novel. So study which was carried out for the first time misrepresented their reading habits. However before jumping to conclusion some question must be answer. To begin with, when was the first study conducted? Or how much time difference is between first study and second study? Maybe there was a huge gap between two studies which may have change the overview of the Waymarsh Citizen over reading habit. If this is true then it is blatant that result of two studies conducted over their reading habit will differ. Maybe, Citizen must have got bored with same type of content over a time and when they change their reading habit that time second study was conduct in this case it is plausible to see two different results of two different studies conducted. If this happens to be true then conclusion drawn is dubious and does not hold any water. Moreover, how many people were included in first survey and second survey? Or what was the population of that city when first survey was conducted? Maybe in first surveys many people were not considered as compare to second survey or vice versa. If this is true then it’s blatant that result will differ and study on both surveys will be incorrect. Maybe population of that city when first study was conducted was less and many literary classic lovers were their but as the population burgeon many mystery lovers increases which change the rating in second study. If this happens to be true then conclusion drawn in the passage seems to be attenuate and it can be benighted. Finally, what is the possibility that second study result is accurate or correct? Maybe first study result is more accurate then the second study result. If this is true then it is not apt to say that first study results were misrepresented. People may not have bolster to study which was carried out at the second time which may have change the result. If this happens to be true then conclusion drawn is false and not apt. In conclusion, evidence provided by the arguer, that support his claim, are dubious as well as erroneous. If all the questions are answer and more evidences are provided then it will strengthen the argument.
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IELTS essay In a study of the reading habits of Waymarsh citizens conducted by the University of Waymarsh most respondents said that they preferred literary classics as reading material However a second study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of b

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
405 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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