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In a number of countries, some people think ti is necessary to spend large sums of money on construction new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spend on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In a number of countries, some people think ti is necessary to spend large sums of money on construction new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spend on improving existing public transport. EGYQ
For many people around the world, the preferred method of transportation is high speed rail. Communters travelling to and from work rely on the safety and efficiency, whill tourist appreciate the convenience and Novelty the trains provided. Others believe that highways, buses and regular trains should be improved before new, high-speed lines are added. Safety chief among concerns for those who travel to work or school on a regular basis. If one drives a car, they have to concentrate on the road not only to avoid accidents but also to prevent other drivers from causing a problem on the road. High Speed rail allows communter to leave the driving to the professional controlling the train, allowing them to get some work done while getting to work safely. In addition, people tend to move further and further away from City centres, where the land and house are more affordable. High Speed rail allows this commuters to travel greater distance in a short amount of time. There is a floor on effect here, because if we can reduce the number of cars on the road, we can also cut down on traffic jams and road delays. On the other hand, high speed trains are expensive, and some believe this money could be spent on repairing motor ways which are used by cars, buses and motorcycles. another possibility would be to use this money to build more regular commuters trains and buses to serve the ever expanding urban population. Moreover, boats and fairies school dub in feets from a budget which focuses more on existing forms of transport. In the end, public transport is an issue which affects us all. The taxes which we pay should be spend on the type of transport which will have the most benefit to all citizens. In addition, we need to take into account how much the environment is damaged by fossil fuels and pollution. Therefore, I believe in order to move forward, we need to embrace the idea of high-speed rail so that future generation can continue to live safely and efficiently.
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people
around the world, the preferred method of transportation is
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high
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speed
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rail
.
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Communters
travelling to and from
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work
rely on the safety and efficiency,
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whill
tourist appreciate the convenience and Novelty the
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trains
provided. Others believe that highways, buses and regular
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trains
should be
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improved
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before
new, high-speed lines are
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added
.

Safety chief among concerns for those who travel to
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work
or school on a regular basis. If one drives a car, they
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have to
concentrate on the
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road
not
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only
to avoid accidents
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but
also
to
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prevent
other drivers from causing a problem on the
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road
.
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High
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Speed
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rail
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allows
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communter
to
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leave
the driving to the professional controlling the
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train
, allowing them to
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get
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some
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work
done while getting to
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safely
.

In addition
,
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people
tend to
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move
further
and
further
away from City
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centres
, where the land and
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house
are more affordable.
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High
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Speed
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rail
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allows
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this
commuters to travel greater distance in a short amount of time. There is a floor on effect here,
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because
if we can
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reduce
the number of cars on the
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road
, we can
also
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cut
down on traffic jams and
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road
delays.

On the other hand
,
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high
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speed
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trains
are expensive, and
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some
believe this money could
be spent
on repairing motor ways which are
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used
by cars, buses and motorcycles.
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another
possibility would be to
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use
this money to build more regular commuters
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trains
and buses to serve the ever expanding urban population.
Moreover
, boats and fairies school dub in
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feets
from a budget which focuses more on existing forms of transport.

In the
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end
, public transport is an issue which affects us all. The taxes which we pay should be
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spend
on the type of transport which will have the most benefit to all citizens.
In addition
, we need to take into account how much the environment
is damaged
by fossil fuels and pollution.
Therefore
, I believe in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
forward, we need to embrace the
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idea
of high-speed
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rail
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so
that future generation can continue to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
safely
and
efficiently
.
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IELTS essay In a number of countries, some people think ti is necessary to spend large sums of money on construction new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spend on improving existing public transport.

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