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Importance of reading books.

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Reading books is the best hobby. A man who like to read books he have average knowledge to spend time in the earth. He never do bad things. He always try to stay positive. Reading books is the best hobby because we can gather knowledge easyly from books, Bool is the bridge of modern society and historical society. We can know about a place where we can't go as like the moon. The man who read books he always try to up his level.
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is the bridge of modern society and historical society. We can know about a place where we can't go as like the moon. The
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IELTS essay Importance of reading books.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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