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Importance of punishment for children lelearning.give your opinion

Importance of punishment for children lelearning. give your opinion xPJ2N
It is of paramount importance for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at their early ages. Some people recommended that punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. Nevertheless, panishments are not only illegal but also they might be harmfall. According to my openion children are too innocent to be punished. There are three important reasons to substantiate my openion with the given statements. Firstly, punishments are considered as the old teaching method. To be precise, psychologists do not recommended punishments due to long term unpleasant effects on Children's mind set. Moreover, punishments can be harmfall physically and mentally both. However, children should have been recognized the difference between right and wrong at their early ages. That age is the perfect age to teach them the correct way. Stratergical methodg should have been used for teach them. Education methods, practical sessions, stories and play group activities are the examples. Good experiance in childhood will made a valuable human beaing in the future. Therefore, school teachers and parents have a responsibility in this case. Other acceptable methods instead of punishments should have been followed by them to teach their children. This essay will accordance with recommend the exemplary behaviour of both parents and teachers. In conclusion, punishments are not helpful to children to learn the distinction between right and wrong. There are number of effective methods to be followed instead of physically and mentally harmfull punishments. Therefore stratergical methods should have been included in the government educational policies.
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children
to learn the difference between right and
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wrong
at their early
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ages
.
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Some
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people
recommended that
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punishment
is necessary to
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help
them learn this distinction.
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panishments
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illegal
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also
they might be
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harmfall
. According to my
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openion
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children
are too innocent to
be punished
.

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important
reasons to substantiate my
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openion
with the
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given
statements.
Firstly
,
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punishments
are considered
as the
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old
teaching
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method
. To be precise, psychologists do not recommended
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punishments
due to long term unpleasant effects on Children's mind set.
Moreover
,
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punishments
can be
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harmfall
physically
and mentally both.

However
,
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children
should have
been recognized
the difference between right and
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wrong
at their early
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ages
. That
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age
is the perfect
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age
to teach them the correct way.
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Stratergical
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methodg
should have been
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used
for teach them. Education
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methods
, practical sessions, stories and play group activities are the examples.

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Good
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experiance
in childhood will
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made
a valuable human
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beaing
in the future.
Therefore
, school teachers and parents have a responsibility
in this case
. Other acceptable
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methods
instead
of
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punishments
should have
been followed
by them to teach their
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children
. This essay will accordance with recommend the exemplary
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behaviour
of both parents and teachers.

In conclusion
,
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punishments
are not helpful to
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children
to learn the distinction between right and
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wrong
. There are number of effective
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methods
to
be followed
instead
of
physically
and mentally
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harmfull
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punishments
.
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Therefore
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stratergical
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methods
should have
been included
in the
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government
educational policies.
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IELTS essay Importance of punishment for children lelearning. give your opinion

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5 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
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