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importance of ethics in everybody life

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The very main importance of ethics in everybody lives is to get happiness, respect, equality in the community. Nobody wants to live a life full of miseries and sorrows and that’s where ethics tell us to be cheerful about live towards yourself and towards others too, because in that way only a happy team can create a harmonious and peaceful environment on the earth. If we consider doctor here, consequently same applies on them too, it's their work to satisfy their patient and stood with them like a pillar even though you know they won't make it out alive. You, making their last journey on the earth a pleasant one can also make you proud of yourself of how you made their farewell so good.
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happiness, respect, equality in the community. Nobody wants to
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a life full of miseries and sorrows and that’s where ethics
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towards yourself and towards others too,
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in that way
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a happy team can create a harmonious and peaceful environment on the earth. If we consider doctor here,
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you know they won't
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you proud of yourself of how you made their farewell
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IELTS essay importance of ethics in everybody life

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  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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