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Importance of Driving Licance

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Cars… They have important duties in our life such as we need them to arrive somewhere, to go work or turn back home, to pick someone up. But, have you ever thought about what drivers need when they drive a car? The answer is simple, driving licence which is a plastic card. Nowadays, most of people have a car and they drive them almost each day. We either see or read crash news on TV or newspaper often. Regulators should educate people who want to drive car in order to prevent traffic crashes and save lives. This education is called ‘’Driver Course’’. There are some rules to attend a driver course. Firstly, people who want to get a driving licence must be above 18 years old. At the other hand, they must have in a good condition by health, sharp eyes and physical ability. Traffic education is given by the teacher and the education covers information of car mechanics, traffic rules and signs, first aid lessons. Students have to pass the written test after this education. If student would be successful at this test, next step will be steering exam. After completing all of these mandatory exam, stundents achieve a right to get a driving licence. In conclusion, educated people in the traffic is highly important to save lives and save money. Therefore, goverments should give traffic education to people not only at driver courses but also at their school lifes.
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Cars…
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, have you ever
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about what
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drivers
need when they drive a
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car
? The answer is simple, driving
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licence
which is a plastic card.

Nowadays, most of
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people
have a
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car and
they drive them almost each day. We either
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see
or read crash news on TV or newspaper
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often
. Regulators should educate
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people
who want to drive
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car
in order to
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prevent
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traffic
crashes and save
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lives
. This
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education
is called
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‘’Driver
Course’’.

There are
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rules
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course.
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people
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get
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licence
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have in a
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condition by health, sharp eyes and physical ability.
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Traffic
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education
is
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given
by the teacher and the
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education
covers information of
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car
mechanics,
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traffic
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rules
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first
aid lessons. Students
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have to
pass the written
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after this
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education
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successful at this
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,
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stundents
achieve a right to
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get
a driving
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licence
.

In conclusion
, educated
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people
in the
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traffic
is
highly
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important
to save
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lives
and save money.
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,
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goverments
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traffic
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education
to
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people
not
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driver
courses
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also
at their school
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lifes
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IELTS essay Importance of Driving Licance

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
241 words
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