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Advantages and disadvantages of online learning

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Benefits of online Education: If you are back from lesson, you have Video of recorded sessions than you see after. Another advantage of online Education is you can eat something in class. Disadvantages: Education online makes you constantly your head to the phone that it makes damange to eyes. And learn is low and if its Education atendens makes more repetition and practice and certainly more learn. Another disadvantage is we confront with Internet.
Benefits of online Education:

If you are back from lesson, you have Video of recorded sessions than you
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after. Another advantage of online Education is you can eat something in
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Disadvantages:

Education online
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to eyes. And learn is low and if its Education
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more repetition and practice and
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more learn. Another disadvantage is we confront with Internet.

IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of online learning

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