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Environment pollution is one of the major problem in the current world. It is happening in different ways

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Environment pollution is one of the major problem in the current world. It is happening in different ways and the plastic is one of the prime reason for. This essay will discuss that what is the impact of usage of plastics and responsibilities of governing and individual to reduce this issue. Most of the consumable item and non-consumable item are rapped with plastic bags and this item is consumed only one time. Therefore, it will automatically increase the volume of non decompose items. Same is creates lot of environmental issues such as as flooding by blocking the canels in cities, reduce the animal population by eting these items. another of major issue is air pollution and increase the global worming by burning plastics. So it is creating health dioceses among the populations. As a example, in Sri Lanka, in half an hour rain most of the cities are experience the flooding due to most canals were blocked by used plastics and polythene. To overcome this problem both government and individual has to take the responsibilities. Demotivate the consumption of plastic government can implement new laws such as prohibiting usage of plastics, by introducing alternative products and increase the taxes in this industry. furthermore individuals aslo can reduce using the plastics and consumer there usable the items. I Inaddition to that follow the proper disposing methods when dispose the non composing itien. In conclusion, increasing of usage of plastics may results create big environment problems and precosionery actions can be taken by governing authorities and individual peoples. it will create plasent world to every ones.
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ways and the
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plastic
is one of the prime reason for. This essay will discuss that what is the impact of usage of
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plastics
and responsibilities of governing and
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individual
to
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reduce
this issue.

Most of the consumable
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item
and non-consumable
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item
are rapped
with
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plastic
bags and this
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item
is consumed
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only
one time.
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, it will
automatically
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items
. Same is creates
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lot of
environmental issues such
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flooding by blocking the
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canels
in cities,
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reduce
the animal population
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by eting
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items
.
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another
of major issue is air pollution and increase the global worming by burning
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plastics
.
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it is creating health dioceses among the populations. As
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by
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used
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plastics
and polythene.

To overcome this problem both
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government
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individual
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has to
take the responsibilities. Demotivate the consumption of
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plastic
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government
can implement new laws such as prohibiting usage of
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plastics
, by introducing alternative products and increase the taxes in this industry.
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furthermore
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individuals
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aslo
can
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reduce
using the
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plastics
and consumer there usable the
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items
. I
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itien
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In conclusion
, increasing of usage of
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plastics
may results create
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big
environment problems and
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precosionery
actions can
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individual
peoples.
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plasent
world to every
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IELTS essay Environment pollution is one of the major problem in the current world. It is happening in different ways

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  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
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