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Import and export types of food

Import and export types of food aAEVP
Import and export is a subject that has been largely discussed nowadays, as well as its benefits and cons. I strongly believe that there are advantages that we need to consider as the support that this type of commerce brings to countries that can't produce adequate food for diverse reasons. Nonetheless, the biggest disadvantage of import food is the fact that the best food is sold to the richest countries and with that sometimes for the country which produces there is nothing left.
Import and export is a subject that has been
largely
discussed nowadays,
as well
as its benefits and cons. I
strongly
believe that there are advantages that we need to consider as the support that this type of commerce brings to countries that can't produce adequate food for diverse reasons. Nonetheless, the biggest disadvantage of import food is the fact that the best food
is sold
to the richest countries and with that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
for the country which produces there is nothing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
.

IELTS essay Import and export types of food

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  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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