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effectiveness of ethics in our life are so many like if i take an example of boosting business, e. g business starts with making trustworthy customers, being polite with them and satisfy them with your most effecient work, and thats how your business leads up towards the sky not because of just your hardwork but your gracious self and well mannered behaviour. if a person is unaware of morals and does not bat an eyes for his behaviour then he faces disgrace and irrespectful actions from his own fellows. so ethics is the only key to make your way through peoples heart in whichever department you work, be it a businessman, dentist, doctor, police, judge etc
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IELTS essay impacts of ethics in our life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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