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impact of advertisments on our lives

impact of advertisments on our lives qary5
The passage reports on the impacts of advertisements in both positive and negative views. Today, advertisements have become more popular with us as we can see them every where. Advertisements are categorised into 2 types: the informative advertisements and the persuasive kinds. The former give customers the information about the products and services. The more popular advertisements, persuasive ones, besides providing the details of goods, also persuading peole to purchase them. However, this kind of advertisement sometimes give misinformation. Advertisements can have adverse effects on consumers as they give false information or the marketing cost increases consumer prices. The author concludes by saying the neutral opinion on the impact of advertisements and recommend people be careful with advertisements.
The passage reports on the impacts of
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advertisements
in both
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positive
and
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negative
views.
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Today
,
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advertisements
have become more popular with us as we can
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see
them
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every where
.
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Advertisements
are
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categorised
into 2 types: the informative
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advertisements
and the persuasive kinds. The former give customers the information about the products and services. The more popular
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advertisements
, persuasive ones,
besides
providing the
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details
of
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goods
,
also
persuading
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peole
to
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purchase
them.
However
, this kind of
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advertisement
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sometimes
give misinformation.
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Advertisements
can have adverse effects on consumers as they give false information or the marketing cost increases consumer prices. The author concludes by saying the neutral opinion on the impact of
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advertisements
and recommend
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people
be careful with
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advertisements
.

IELTS essay impact of advertisments on our lives

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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