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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Now a days immigration is increasing in the world wide. Even though it has good and bad effect on the society. In this essay we will discuss about the main reasons and consequences of the immigration Firstly we can think abut the reasons for the fact that better job opportunities. Even though there own country they have jobs but they are looking forward and seeking good quality life. For example nurses, after completing there graduation, most of them are going for abroad for better job including high payment and family allowances. Secondly when it comes to the child education most of the parents wants there child study with them in the abroad. Foe example mother or father working in any European country so there child also will study in European country.
Did you mean “nowadays”?
Now a days
immigration is increasing in the
The adjective/adverb “worldwide” is spelled as one word.
world wide
.
Even though
it has
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good
and
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bad
effect on the society. In this essay we will
Did you mean simply “discuss the”? You do not need the word “about” here.
discuss about the
main reasons and consequences of the immigration
Firstly
we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
abut the reasons for the fact that better job opportunities.
Even though
there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
country they have jobs
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they are looking forward and seeking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
quality life.
For example
nurses, after completing there graduation, most of them are going for abroad for better job including high payment and family allowances.
Secondly
when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to the child education most of the parents wants there child study with them in the abroad. Foe example mother or father working in any European country
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
there child
also
will study in European country.

IELTS essay Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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  American English
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131 words
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