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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Now a days immigration is increasing in the world wide. Even though it has good and bad effect on the society. In this essay we will discuss about the main reasons and consequences of the immigration Firstly we can think abut the reasons for the fact that better job opportunities. Even though there own country they have jobs but they are looking forward and seeking good quality life. For example nurses, after completing there graduation, most of them are going for abroad for better job including high payment and family allowances. Secondly when it comes to the child education most of the parents wants there child study with them in the abroad. Foe example mother or father working in any European country so there child also will study in European country.

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Now a days
 immigration is increasing in the The adjective/adverb “worldwide” is spelled as one word.worldwide
world wide
. Even though
 it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 effect on the society. In this essay we will Did you mean simply “discuss the”? You do not need the word “about” here.discuss the
discuss about the
 main reasons and consequences of the immigration Firstly
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 abut the reasons for the fact that better job opportunities. Even though
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own
 country they have jobs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they are looking forward and seeking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 quality life. For example
 nurses, after completing there graduation, most of them are going for abroad for better job including high payment and family allowances. Secondly
 when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to the child education most of the parents wants there child study with them in the abroad. Foe example mother or father working in any European country This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 there child also
 will study in European country. 