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Imagine that your city or neighborhood wants to start a program to improve the area. Describe the program and tell how it would affect the quality of life.

Imagine that your city or neighborhood wants to start a program to improve the area. Describe the program and tell how it would affect the quality of life. PL6eE
In the beautiful morning day, when I came out of my bed after a long nice sleep, i heard someone announce something noisily outside. Therefore, I opened a window and looked out, a big sign with an attractive slogan showed their owners’ idea - Listen to the Cries of the World. This was a slogan for the environmental conservation program. That day was not Earth Day, so I was quite curious about the program and the slogan was very catchy. After I left my house to go down the street to find out more about the things were happening, I saw a great billboard wrote: “The Campaign to save Our Environment, Our Future. ” Then the presenter shared her speech with us. Which was to protect the environment, which was to cut electricity and water, reduce the amount of electricity consumed every day, which is to limit the discharge of waste, plastic bags into the environment. Her speech was really impressive. Her style, her words were charming, coherent, and fluent. She presented it so clearly that everyone enthusiastically supported it. Then, everything started from that day. People first was eager to follow the basic rule “3R” and live green, but after 2 or 3 days, some of them became bored, because their lives weren’t convenient as before. But the people in charge of this program keep coming to everyone’s houses and encourage we, so the residents quickly went back to the healthy, green living. And I know why they choose to use the 3R for the starting point. Thus, the 3R rule is the most simple and easiest method to bring back the clean atmosphere. First, because it is so easy to remember. It's three words only- "Reduce, Reuse and Recycle", fewer words than 5K or 3W's, remembering easily than the subjects you need to study at school. For the next reason, it do not cost you so much or even any money. Due to the fact that "reuse" means to use again something, figure out how to use it again effectively, not to buy a new one, so tell me why is your money lost? "Reduce" indicates the actions of become or make something become less or smaller in size, quantity, price, etc, so you can lower the money you need to pay daily for electricity, water bills. "Recycle" expresses the creations of new things by your old things, have a new thing in your house with the familiar things and do it by your hands will create a very strange happiness and proud. Finally, this so basic and well-known rule can improve your capacity of adaptation to all circumstances, your brainstorm skill. By follow it, you can learn how to be patient because your life will change in both positive and negative ways when you suddenly change your life habits, but the great result will come in the end. So please everyone, keep working! A week passed, my street became clean. The trash people throw out each day isn’t haphazard anymore, it looks neatly and orderly. We now can breathe freely, can stroll and walk on the clean, shiny, no trash, no products of any mammals, no stench. The environment have improved, so that the atmosphere in our neighborhood also have improved a lot, now I can keep in touch with all residents. That is a really good and effective program that i have ever seen in my life, or at least in the area of my neighborhood (not contain schooling). In conclusion, this program is more effective than I think and it affects my life positively, we become friendly to each other, to live peacefully under the blue sky together.
In the
beautiful
morning day, when I came out of my bed after a long nice sleep,
i
heard someone announce something
noisily
outside.
Therefore
, I opened a window and looked out, a
big
sign
with an attractive slogan
showed
their owners’
idea
-
Listen to the Cries of the World. This was a slogan for the environmental conservation
program
. That day was not Earth Day,
so
I was quite curious about the
program
and the slogan was
very
catchy. After I
left
my
house
to go down the street to find out more about the things were happening, I
saw
a great billboard wrote: “The Campaign to save Our
Environment
, Our Future. ” Then the presenter shared her speech with us. Which was to protect the
environment
, which was to
cut
electricity and water,
reduce
the amount of electricity consumed every day, which is to limit the discharge of waste, plastic bags into the
environment
. Her speech was
really
impressive. Her style, her words were charming, coherent, and fluent. She presented it
so
clearly
that everyone
enthusiastically
supported it.

Then, everything
started
from that day.
People
first
was eager to follow the basic
rule
“3R” and
live
green,
but
after 2 or 3 days,
some
of them became bored,
because
their
lives
weren’t convenient as
before
.
But
the
people
in charge of this
program
keep
coming to everyone’s
houses
and encourage we,
so
the residents
quickly
went back to the healthy, green living. And I know why they choose to
use
the 3R for the starting point.

Thus
, the 3R
rule
is
the most simple
and easiest method to bring back the clean atmosphere.
First
,
because
it is
so
easy to remember. It's three words
only
-
"
Reduce
, Reuse and Recycle
"
, fewer words than 5K or 3W's, remembering
easily
than the subjects you need to study at school. For the
next
reason, it
do
not cost you
so
much or even any money. Due to the fact that
"
reuse
"
means to
use
again something, figure out how to
use
it again
effectively
, not to
buy
a new one,
so
tell
me why is your money lost?
"
Reduce
"
indicates the actions of become or
make
something become less or
smaller in size
, quantity, price, etc,
so
you can lower the money you need to pay daily for electricity, water bills.
"
Recycle
"
expresses the creations of new things by your
old
things, have a new thing in your
house
with the familiar things and do it by your hands will create a
very
strange happiness and proud.
Finally
, this
so
basic and well-known
rule
can
improve
your capacity of adaptation to all circumstances, your brainstorm
skill
. By
follow it
, you can learn how to be patient
because
your
life
will
change
in both
positive
and
negative
ways when you
suddenly
change
your
life
habits,
but
the great result will
come
in the
end
.
So
please
everyone,
keep
working!

A week passed, my street became clean. The trash
people
throw out each day isn’t haphazard anymore, it looks
neatly
and orderly. We
now
can breathe
freely
, can stroll and walk on the clean, shiny, no trash, no products of any mammals, no stench. The
environment
have
improved
,
so
that the atmosphere in our neighborhood
also
have
improved
a lot,
now
I can
keep
in touch with all residents.
That is
a
really
good
and effective
program
that
i
have ever
seen
in my
life
, or at least in the area of my neighborhood (not contain schooling).
In conclusion
, this
program
is more effective than I
think
and it affects my
life
positively
, we become friendly to each other, to
live
peacefully
under the blue sky together.
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IELTS essay Imagine that your city or neighborhood wants to start a program to improve the area. Describe the program and tell how it would affect the quality of life.

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