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If I want to have a meaningful life, I should do things that make us happy and motivate to live.

If I want to have a meaningful life, I should do things that make us happy and motivate to live. gqAx3
Firstly, my family is one of motivation makes me happy because they always stands by my side when I have a problems. I can share my serect with them and when I am in with them, I always feel happier and safer. Secondly, money is very important. I can do a lot of things when i have money such as I can help poor people by donate money. Money can give me a better life. Finally, an interesting job is one of things make my life more happy. If i have a job which I extremely love, I can have motivated to work. Therefore, I can have a opportunity to promotion and make huge amout of money.
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, my family is one of motivation
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they always
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by my side when I have
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a problems
. I can share my
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serect
with them and when I am in with them, I always feel happier and safer.
Secondly
,
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money
is
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very
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important
. I can do
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a lot of
things when
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i
have
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money
such as I can
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help
poor
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people
by donate
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money
.
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Money
can give me a better life.
Finally
, an interesting job is one of things
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make
my life more happy. If
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i
have a job which I
extremely
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love
, I can have motivated to work.
Therefore
, I can have
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a
opportunity to promotion and
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make
huge
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IELTS essay If I want to have a meaningful life, I should do things that make us happy and motivate to live.

Essay
  American English
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117 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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