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If a product is good for it meet people needs people will buy it so advertising is unnecessary and no more than and entertainment to what extent do you agree or disagree

It doesn't has any requirement for a product advertisement if a product is the best in market for people like it and it is not useful without entertainment however I believe advertisements are necessary in sometimes I am partially agreed with this statement. Two common speed advertisements are necessary for products whether they are good or the average firstly advertisements are discussed for hammering to people and they will remember the product to add more If a company launch a new product in market initially they have to marketing the new product secondly when in theatre new movie is about to launch their advertisement there are movie on the Internet such as YouTube and social media. Further more people are dependent on the advertisements business it is irrefutable that some advertisements are for awareness in people to illustrate Government and some cancer hospitals are doing advertisements on the TV radio and the internet for tobacco products that tobacco ad dangerous for human body and it prevents this is like cancer. On the other hand, why advertisements are do not need because of some products are already famous in market so whether products do advertisements or not people will buy it. Nevertheless, i believe that some advertisements are doing just waste of money and advertisements costs included in products so people have to pay more for buying products. To put it in a nutshell, however, i accord that advertisements are necessary to attract people. The significance of advertisements cannot be brought into comparison to see they are important or not.
It doesn't
The auxiliary verb ‘do’ requires the base form of the verb: “have”
has
any requirement for a
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product
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advertisement
if a
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product
is the best in market for
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people
like
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it and
it is not useful without entertainment
however
I believe
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advertisements
are necessary in
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sometimes
I am
partially
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agreed
with this statement.

Two common speed
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advertisements
are necessary for
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products
whether they are
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good
or the average
firstly
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advertisements
are discussed
for hammering to
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people and
they will remember the
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product
to
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add
more If a
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company
launch a new
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product
in market
initially
they
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have to
marketing the new
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product
secondly
when in
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theatre
new movie is about to launch their
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advertisement
there are
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movie
on the Internet such as YouTube and social media.

Further
more
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people
are dependent on the
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advertisements
business it is irrefutable that
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some
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advertisements
are for awareness in
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people
to illustrate
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Government
and
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some
cancer hospitals are doing
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advertisements
on the TV radio and the internet for tobacco
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products
that tobacco ad
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dangerous
for human
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body and
it
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prevents
this is like cancer.

On the other hand
, why
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advertisements
are
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do
not need
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because
of
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some
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products
are already
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famous
in market
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so
whether
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products
do
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advertisements
or not
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people
will
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buy
it.
Nevertheless
,
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i
believe that
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some
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advertisements
are doing
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just
waste of money and
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advertisements
costs included in
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products
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so
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people
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have to
pay more for buying products.

To put it in a nutshell,
however
,
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i
accord that
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advertisements
are necessary to attract
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people
. The significance of
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advertisements
cannot
be brought
into comparison to
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see
they are
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important
or not.
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IELTS essay If a product is good for it meet people needs people will buy it so advertising is unnecessary and no more than and entertainment

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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